每个人的生命只有一次,一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救?请根据以下提示,以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。

(十三)【2019 •四川凉山州】
每个人的生命只有一次,一定要珍爱自己的生命。该怎样安全自救?请根据以下提示,以How to Protect Ourselves为标题写一篇发言稿。


安全对每个人都很重要

交通:外出时遵守交通规则

食品:吃健康食物,少吃垃圾食品

活动:体育锻炼时,不要弄伤自己

不私自下河游泳

自救是重要的技能之一

交友需谨慎

远离危险之人

遇到危险保持冷静

然后要及时报警或向老师、家长求助

尽可能避免受伤害
保证自己的安全

要求:1. 语言表达准确,短文连贯、通顺。
2. 短文应包括所有内容,可适当发挥,不要逐句翻译。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头部分已给出,不计人总词数。

Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?
Here are some suggestions. _____________________________________________________________________
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In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
That’s all. Thank you!
写作思路
本文是根据材料提示写作,所以分析所给材料之后,首先要在头脑中确定文章的整体结构,然后逐步细化.就像盖房子一样,先有整体框架,然后是房间,最后是室内装修.
参考范文
Dear friends,
Everyone has only one life, we should treasure our lives. But how can we protect ourselves?
Here are some suggestions.
On the one hand, we should realize the importantce of safety and know what to do. First,when we go out, we  must follow traffic rules. If we walk,we must  use sidewalks  and mustn't run a red light;If we ride bikes,we must ride along the right side and shouldn't carry others;Second, we should develop a healthy eating habits. Eat regular meals every day and try not to eat junk food or eat less.When food smells bad,  don't eat it.Third,when we play sports or games, be careful not to hurt ourselves.Fourth,we mustn't swim in rivers without our parents or other adults around.
On the other hand, we should learn to protect ousrselves, which is one of the most important living skills. We must be careful when making friends especially online.Some person online are not honest.They are dangerous, so we must keep away from them. If we happen to have trouble, we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents, teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselvs from danger or being hurt.
In a word, we should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.

That's all.  Thank you !

【名师点评】
高分句型一: we should realize the importance of safety and know what to do. 我们应该意识到安全的重要性,并且知道如何去做。短语the importance of,what to do结构;
高分句型二:when we go out,we must follow traffic rules. 当我们外出时,必须遵守交通规则。状语从句,情态动词;
高分句型三:we should learn to protect ourselves,which is one of the most important living skills.我们应该学会保护自己,这是最重要的生存能力之一。定语从句;
高分句型四:we must keep away from them.我们必须远离他们。keep away from 短语
高分句型五: we should keep calm and remember to ask our parents,teachers or police for help so that we can protect ourselves from danger or being hurt.
我们应该保持冷静,并且记住及时向家长,老师或警察求助。以便于保护自己远离危险,避免受伤害。remember to do结构,ask...for help,in time短语;so that引导的目的状语从句,protect.. from...短语。

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