习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务,作为初中毕业生,你有什么人生规划?请根据以下提示,写一篇英语演讲稿。

(十九)【2019 •泰安】
习近平总书记在全国教育大会上提出了“立德树人”的人才培养根本任务,作为初中毕业生,你有什么人生规划?请根据以下提示,写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示: 
1. 作为中国人而自豪:过去,我国优秀的传统文化影响了世界:今天,祖国在全国人民的努力下越来越强大,许多科技世界领先;… 
2. 为实现“中国梦”而奋斗:学会做一个懂感恩、守规矩、善良诚信的人;不畏难,努力学习知识、提高能力,将来成为一名…
要求:语句通顺,意思连贯,可根据提示适当发挥,不要逐句翻译;演讲中不得提及生个人身份的相关信息,如人名、校名或地名等;词数80—100,开头结尾已给出(不计入词数)。
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写作思路
本文属于材料作文,谈论祖国的伟大强盛以及为实现中国梦我们应该做的努力。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
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Hello, everyone! As a Chinese, I am so proud of it. In the past, our great traditional culture made a difference to the world, such as sailing, communicating and so on. Nowadays, our country is becoming stronger and stronger by working hard of all Chinese. A lot of science and technology lead the world, such as high speed, Chang’e 4 and Hong Kong-Zhuhai-Macau Bridge and so on.
As a teenager, we should do as follows to achieve our Chinese dream. First of all, we are supposed to thank all the people who devote themselves to making our country wonderful. What’s more, we need follow the rules. In school we should obey the school rules. Only by doing these dimple things can we become a person that the country needs. In addition, we’d better not lie and be a honest man in order that all people can trust us. Last but not least, we should try our best to work hard and when face difficulties, we never give up. I am going to be a scientists. If I am a scientist, I will do more researches and let other countries admire us.
That's all. Thank you!
名师点评
这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别使用一些亮点词句,如be proud of, make a difference to, such as, and so on, 比较级and比较级, devote oneself to doing, in order that, try one’s best以及first of all, what’s more, in addition和last but not least等,增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。
 
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