1．（2018·湖北省中考真题）
书面表达
目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下表内容写一篇短文。
注意：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2．词数：80词左右：（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3．文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。
Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at
weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after—school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that taking after—school classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school. What’s more, students can avoid spending too much time watching TV or playing computer games.
However, others think students need time to rest and relax. After—school classes can cause a lot of stress for students and it is not good for their development.
In my opinion, if necessary, we can take after—school classes, but it can’t take up too much time. We should first rest well at weekends and on holidays.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如middle school students，all kinds of，after—school classes，at weekends，on holidays，get into，avoid doing，too much time，watching TV，play computer games，be good for，a lot of，in my opinion，last forever等。而Some people think that taking after—school classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school./ However, others think students need time to rest and relax.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
书面表达
目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下表内容写一篇短文。
| 赞成者的观点 | 1. 能够学得更好，上更好的高中； 2. 避免花太多时间看电视、玩游戏。 |
| 反对者的观点 | 1.学生需要时间休息； 2. 太多压力不利于发展。 |
| 你的观点 | 1. …… 2. …… |
注意：1．文章必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；
2．词数：80词左右：（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）
3．文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。
Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at
weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after—school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.
Some people think that taking after—school classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school. What’s more, students can avoid spending too much time watching TV or playing computer games.
However, others think students need time to rest and relax. After—school classes can cause a lot of stress for students and it is not good for their development.
In my opinion, if necessary, we can take after—school classes, but it can’t take up too much time. We should first rest well at weekends and on holidays.
【解析】
【详解】
亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如middle school students，all kinds of，after—school classes，at weekends，on holidays，get into，avoid doing，too much time，watching TV，play computer games，be good for，a lot of，in my opinion，last forever等。而Some people think that taking after—school classes can help students learn better and get into a good high school./ However, others think students need time to rest and relax.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
