Ⅵ.概要写作
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60词左右的内容概要。
A Helping Hand
When a disaster occurs,humanity often loses interest in the event after the devastation is over.An accident occurs and more people care about the number of lives lost compared to the help offered.Last summer,my mom taught me the importance of this in everyday life when she helped a person in need.
I remember climbing into the car full of hot summer air and wondering why Mrs Edelman,my friend’s mom,was sitting in the front seat.My mom and Mrs Edelman weren’t close friends,just friendly,so I was surprised to see her.My mom told me Mrs Edelman had gotten into a car crash and needed a ride home,accompanied by a look that said don’t ask.My mind was picturing a million scenes on the drive to Mrs Edelman’s from the Bat Mitzvah I had just attended.
After we dropped her off,my mom let out a sigh of relief and began to tell the story.She spoke of the busy street corner outside of the temple where she had seen Mrs Edelman standing obviously upset.She had totaled her brand new minivan because she was distracted and ran through a red light.Mrs Edelman was teeming with anxiety and despair;her fragile body shook like a leaf even though it was a hot summer day.
“I got out of my car and walked up to her,” my mom said.“I helped her explain to the police what had happened and assisted her in contacting her insurance.” My mom was a kind person so I wasn’t surprised.“After the car had been towed,I took her to get some coffee and calm down.The cozy cafe and the aroma of freshly baked scones smoothed her.”
Mrs Edelman said she was in a predicament.Her husband was out of town and she needed to pick up her daughter and get a ride home.After my mom offered to give her a ride,she bombarded my mom with a million thank-yous and was quite relieved.
The car pulled into the driveway just as my mom finished the story.I thought about how grateful I’d be if someone stopped to help me in a similar situation.The lesson I learned had become an important theme in my life:to always be kind and offer a helping hand.
参考范文
The story tells us the writer’s mom offered a helping hand to others.(要点1) Mrs Edelman had a car crash and stood there anxiously when the writer’s mom drove past.She helped Mrs Edelman contact her insurance and comforted her with a cup of coffee and some scones.(要点2) When knowing she had to pick up her daughter,the writer’s mom gave her a ride.(要点3) The writer learned from her mom that we should always be kind to others in need.(要点4)
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇 60词左右的内容概要。
A Helping Hand
When a disaster occurs,humanity often loses interest in the event after the devastation is over.An accident occurs and more people care about the number of lives lost compared to the help offered.Last summer,my mom taught me the importance of this in everyday life when she helped a person in need.
I remember climbing into the car full of hot summer air and wondering why Mrs Edelman,my friend’s mom,was sitting in the front seat.My mom and Mrs Edelman weren’t close friends,just friendly,so I was surprised to see her.My mom told me Mrs Edelman had gotten into a car crash and needed a ride home,accompanied by a look that said don’t ask.My mind was picturing a million scenes on the drive to Mrs Edelman’s from the Bat Mitzvah I had just attended.
After we dropped her off,my mom let out a sigh of relief and began to tell the story.She spoke of the busy street corner outside of the temple where she had seen Mrs Edelman standing obviously upset.She had totaled her brand new minivan because she was distracted and ran through a red light.Mrs Edelman was teeming with anxiety and despair;her fragile body shook like a leaf even though it was a hot summer day.
“I got out of my car and walked up to her,” my mom said.“I helped her explain to the police what had happened and assisted her in contacting her insurance.” My mom was a kind person so I wasn’t surprised.“After the car had been towed,I took her to get some coffee and calm down.The cozy cafe and the aroma of freshly baked scones smoothed her.”
Mrs Edelman said she was in a predicament.Her husband was out of town and she needed to pick up her daughter and get a ride home.After my mom offered to give her a ride,she bombarded my mom with a million thank-yous and was quite relieved.
The car pulled into the driveway just as my mom finished the story.I thought about how grateful I’d be if someone stopped to help me in a similar situation.The lesson I learned had become an important theme in my life:to always be kind and offer a helping hand.
参考范文
The story tells us the writer’s mom offered a helping hand to others.(要点1) Mrs Edelman had a car crash and stood there anxiously when the writer’s mom drove past.She helped Mrs Edelman contact her insurance and comforted her with a cup of coffee and some scones.(要点2) When knowing she had to pick up her daughter,the writer’s mom gave her a ride.(要点3) The writer learned from her mom that we should always be kind to others in need.(要点4)
