根据一项新的调查,学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师,对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育

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根据一项新的调查,学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师,对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育,请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题,提出你的建议。
要求:
1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名。
2. 书写工整,语句通顺,连贯,词数不少于80.
参考词汇: cover v. 遮盖   take the lift 乘坐电梯  exit n. 出口 towel n. 毛巾shut off 切断
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根据一项新的调查,学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师,对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育,请以“How to Protect Yourself in a Fire”为题,提出你的建议。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
参考范文
How to Protect Yourself in a Fire
According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. You should know some ways to protect yourself .It will help to keep you safe in the fire. First, you should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel. You mustn't take the lift or jump off a window, you should find the exit. The most important thing is to keep calm. If you can't go in the house, the safest place is close to water, like washroom .If the fire is serious, you should call 119 for help. These may help us.
【名师点评】
这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语,可见该生英语功底扎实。如First, You should shut off the electricity. You should cover your mouth with the wet towel等使文章的表达更丰富,更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
 
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