（七）【2019 •江苏省南京市】
假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议．请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件．
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing． The app is to help learners explore ideas， organize them and write them down． Your ideas are needed！
Here' s what to do：
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative！
Please let us know：
● What's the name of the app？
● What problem does the app solve？
● What does the app do？
Contact us at appdesign@Britech com
注意:
1．内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2．词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）；
3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for designing an app for English writing．_______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇根据英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for doing an APP for English writing． I'd like to share my ideas here． Could its name be "right made easy"？【APP的名字】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．【高分句型一】We don't know how to organize ideas，use proper words，and so on． I hope it can solve these problems．【APP要解决的问题】
Here is my advice on what the APP does． First， it should provide some reading materials． The more we read， the better we write． Second． The APP should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills． Third， there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions．【APP能做什么】
I hope my advice is worth taking．【高分句型二】
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．我们中的许多人写作困难．
have difficulty doing干某事有困难．
【高分句型二】
I hope my advice is worth taking． 我希望我的建议值得采纳．
be worth doing 值得干某事．
假如你是李华，在网上看到英国B公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议．请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件．
IDEAS NEEDED
Britech is now designing an app that helps learners with their English writing． The app is to help learners explore ideas， organize them and write them down． Your ideas are needed！
Here' s what to do：
Write to share your ideas! Feel free to be creative！
Please let us know：
● What's the name of the app？
● What problem does the app solve？
● What does the app do？
Contact us at appdesign@Britech com
注意:
1．内容涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
2．词数80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）；
3．文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for designing an app for English writing．_______________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇根据英国Britech公司为正在开发的一款提高英语写作能力的应用软件（app）征集网友建议。请根据网上的征集信息，用英语给该公司写一封电子邮件。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam，
Thanks for doing an APP for English writing． I'd like to share my ideas here． Could its name be "right made easy"？【APP的名字】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．【高分句型一】We don't know how to organize ideas，use proper words，and so on． I hope it can solve these problems．【APP要解决的问题】
Here is my advice on what the APP does． First， it should provide some reading materials． The more we read， the better we write． Second． The APP should have an online course so that we can develop our writing skills． Third， there should be an e-teacher who can correct mistakes and offer suggestions．【APP能做什么】
I hope my advice is worth taking．【高分句型二】
【名师点评】
【高分句型一】
Many of us have difficulty in writing．我们中的许多人写作困难．
have difficulty doing干某事有困难．
【高分句型二】
I hope my advice is worth taking． 我希望我的建议值得采纳．
be worth doing 值得干某事．
