It was August, the peak season for tourism. Olav Hylland, the owner of a local restaurant, was expec

4.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was August, the peak season for tourism. Olav Hylland, the owner of a local restaurant, was expecting as many as 500 tourists to visit and eat there. With a joyful heart, he jumped into a van, which he had just bought to transport cargo for his restaurant, and set off.
Leaving his home, he turned onto the main road with a tunnel 300 meters ahead. The 11.4 kilometer tunnel was the only way to access the local scenic spot, where his restaurant was located. Two years earlier a truck caught fire inside it and the tunnel's closure for repairs was a disastrous blow to Olav's business. The road to his restaurant was blocked and the stream of tourists halted. Although it was difficult, he managed to keep their staff on.
“And today will be a perfect day.” Olav thought.
Inside the tunnel everything went normal. But when he was near the end, Olav spotted an unusual light 50 meters ahead. Then he saw something burning.
Horrified, he stopped dead in his tracks. A tour bus was on fire! At the back where the engine was, dozens of tourists were stumbling towards him, getting away from the flames." They're going the wrong way." Olav thought, knowing the tunnel exit was just 500 meters ahead round a bend ahead of him. Then he realized the bus was now burning so fiercely that it was impossible for them to get around it.
As a former volunteer firefighter, Olav first had to raise the alarm. Grabbing his cell phone, he entered the codes with shaking hands. “A bus is on fire! Close the tunnel gates!” Both gates were shut to avoid the entry of more vehicles, but the thick smoke was pouring out of the bus in his direction under the influence of the strong wind. In no time it would black out the tunnel, choking and blinding anyone inside it.
There was no way the poor tourists could outrun the toxic fumes.
Every minute counted.
注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
Immediately, Olav turned the van round, jumped out and opened the sliding doors to the empty cargo space.
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Paragraph 2
After a 20 minutes' desperate drive, finally there they arrived — the exit of the tunnel!
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Immediately, Olav turned the van round, jumped out and opened the sliding doors to the empty cargo space. All the food were thrown on the ground but Olav ignored his good. Olav asked the tourists to come into his van. Since there were no other way, the tourists started to pile in. Olav ran round to make sure no one was left behind.After all the guests were in his van, the smoke was so thick that it was hard to see clearly in the tunnel.
Paragraph 2:
After a 20 minutes' desperate drive, finally there they arrived — the exit of the tunnel! The firefighters were waiting at the exit, who went to put out the fire. Olav went on driving his van and sent the tourists to the hospital where some of the horrified tourists were saved. They were grateful for what Olav did. Although Olav lost all his food, he didn't regret what he had done.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Olav开了一家饭店,旅游旺季的时候,他出去采购,回来通过一个隧道,他发现一辆旅游车着火了,游客纷纷出来逃避,Olav知道游客走错了方向,他先打电话报警,将隧道的门关闭。最后他帮助游客们逃了出来,大家都很感谢他。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“Olav立刻调转车头,跳下车,打开通往空货舱的滑动门。”可知,第一段可描写Olav是如何帮助这些游客的经过的。
②由第二段首句内容“经过20分钟的拼命开车,他们终于到了——隧道的出口!”可知,第二段可描写Olav带领游客逃了出来,大家都很感谢他。
2.续写线索:Olav打开滑动门——游客上车——Olav开车出隧道——Olav把游客送到医院——游客感谢Olav——Olav感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
进入:come into/ get into
确保:make sure/ guarantee
到达:arrive/ reach
情绪类
感谢:be grateful for/ show one’s gratitude
困难:hard / difficult
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Since there were no other way, the tourists started to pile in. (运用了since引导原因状语从句)
[高分句型2] After all the guests were in his van, the smoke was so thick that it was hard to see clearly in the tunnel. (运用了结果状语从句)
 
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