5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A couple of months before I started high school, my parents gave me the greatest gift any teenage boy could ask for: a cellphone. I lived on that phone all summer with my face buried in its screen. I texted with every friend who was lucky enough to have a texting plan. I ignored my family and my surroundings. Being connected was more important than being present.
So, you can imagine my displeasure when l learned what my dad had planned for our family vacation that year. “This year,” my dad said, “we’ll be doing something special. We’re going camping!” His excitement was met with a disappointed sigh. It wasn’t my dream vacation, but I remained unbothered throughout the packing and planning. My mind was on my phone. I was so buried in the screen, in fact, that the first time I can remember truly looking up was when we drove across a bridge on the way to our campsite.
I stared out the window and saw redwoods towering above us, their branches threatening to pierce (刺破) the blue sky. I saw a roaring river, with slivers of silky black water appearing between crashing white rapids. The air blowing into the car from the open windows was hot and smelled of pine. But none of that mattered to me. The reason I had looked up was for something far more serious. My phone no longer had service.
The last hour of the drive was increasingly tense. My dad announced that he had chosen a campsite that had no cell service, and that my phone would be useless until we returned home. I would be trapped in the forest for four days with no way to contact the outside world! I went through the full cycle of teenage emotions during the first day of the trip. I raged (发怒). I bargained. I begged. I flip-flopped (转变) from a depressive state to anger and back.
I went to bed angrily that night. But when I awoke in the morning, something had changed.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Instead of burying myself in my phone, l focused on something else: my surroundings.
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Paragraph 2:
The next four days passed in a flash with many fun activities.
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【答案】Para 1:
Instead of burying myself in my phone, l focused on something else: my surroundings. I let the noise of the wilderness wash over me, animals and bugs creating a ruckus that was both loud and serene at the same time. My anger turned to peace, then little interest and, finally, excitement. Standing on the high campsite, I felt the weight of stress melt from my shoulders as I viewed the vast expanse that unfolded below me. The sight that met my startled eyes nearly took my breath away. For the first time, I thought camping in a place that had no cell service might not be so bad.
Para 2:
The next four days passed in a flash with many fun activities. I hiked. I swam. I fished. My dad and I learned how to start a fire together after several false starts. We cooked together and I ate the sweetest marshmallows I had ever tasted. Dad told me stories of his life, stories I had never heard or perhaps I hadn’t been listening. When the weekend came to an end, I realized I hadn’t thought of my phone once. I hadn’t felt the need to be connected to anywhere else. It dawned on me that what mattered most were the moments I was sharing with just my father and nature.
【分析】
本文讲述了在作者上高中的前几个月，父母送给他一部手机，整个夏天作者都沉迷于用手机与朋友们发消息，忽略了家人和周围的环境。当父亲宣布假期要去野营时，作者感到很失望，那意味着他不能玩手机了，最终，父亲选择了一个没有手机服务的露营地，这意味着在露营期间，作者无法与外界联系，他感到很生气，但当他第二天早上醒来时，一些事情已经改变了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我没有沉迷于我的手机，而是专注于别的事情：我周围的环境。”可知，第一段可描写作者周围的环境及作者情绪上的变化。
②由第二段首句内容“接下来的四天在许多有趣的活动中转瞬即逝。”可知，第二段可描写四天中作者经历了哪些有趣的活动及通过这次野营作者领悟到的道理。
2.续写线索：欣赏周围的环境——愤怒转为兴奋——没有手机没那么糟糕——野营中有趣的活动——作者的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.结束：come to an end/draw to an end
②.想起：think of/call to mind
情绪类
①.愤怒：anger/wrath/ indignation
②.坏的：bad/terrible/awful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. The sight that met my startled eyes nearly took my breath away. （由关系代词that引导限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. When the weekend came to an end, I realized I hadn’t thought of my phone once. （由when引导时间状语从句）
A couple of months before I started high school, my parents gave me the greatest gift any teenage boy could ask for: a cellphone. I lived on that phone all summer with my face buried in its screen. I texted with every friend who was lucky enough to have a texting plan. I ignored my family and my surroundings. Being connected was more important than being present.
So, you can imagine my displeasure when l learned what my dad had planned for our family vacation that year. “This year,” my dad said, “we’ll be doing something special. We’re going camping!” His excitement was met with a disappointed sigh. It wasn’t my dream vacation, but I remained unbothered throughout the packing and planning. My mind was on my phone. I was so buried in the screen, in fact, that the first time I can remember truly looking up was when we drove across a bridge on the way to our campsite.
I stared out the window and saw redwoods towering above us, their branches threatening to pierce (刺破) the blue sky. I saw a roaring river, with slivers of silky black water appearing between crashing white rapids. The air blowing into the car from the open windows was hot and smelled of pine. But none of that mattered to me. The reason I had looked up was for something far more serious. My phone no longer had service.
The last hour of the drive was increasingly tense. My dad announced that he had chosen a campsite that had no cell service, and that my phone would be useless until we returned home. I would be trapped in the forest for four days with no way to contact the outside world! I went through the full cycle of teenage emotions during the first day of the trip. I raged (发怒). I bargained. I begged. I flip-flopped (转变) from a depressive state to anger and back.
I went to bed angrily that night. But when I awoke in the morning, something had changed.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Instead of burying myself in my phone, l focused on something else: my surroundings.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
The next four days passed in a flash with many fun activities.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Para 1:
Instead of burying myself in my phone, l focused on something else: my surroundings. I let the noise of the wilderness wash over me, animals and bugs creating a ruckus that was both loud and serene at the same time. My anger turned to peace, then little interest and, finally, excitement. Standing on the high campsite, I felt the weight of stress melt from my shoulders as I viewed the vast expanse that unfolded below me. The sight that met my startled eyes nearly took my breath away. For the first time, I thought camping in a place that had no cell service might not be so bad.
Para 2:
The next four days passed in a flash with many fun activities. I hiked. I swam. I fished. My dad and I learned how to start a fire together after several false starts. We cooked together and I ate the sweetest marshmallows I had ever tasted. Dad told me stories of his life, stories I had never heard or perhaps I hadn’t been listening. When the weekend came to an end, I realized I hadn’t thought of my phone once. I hadn’t felt the need to be connected to anywhere else. It dawned on me that what mattered most were the moments I was sharing with just my father and nature.
【分析】
本文讲述了在作者上高中的前几个月，父母送给他一部手机，整个夏天作者都沉迷于用手机与朋友们发消息，忽略了家人和周围的环境。当父亲宣布假期要去野营时，作者感到很失望，那意味着他不能玩手机了，最终，父亲选择了一个没有手机服务的露营地，这意味着在露营期间，作者无法与外界联系，他感到很生气，但当他第二天早上醒来时，一些事情已经改变了。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我没有沉迷于我的手机，而是专注于别的事情：我周围的环境。”可知，第一段可描写作者周围的环境及作者情绪上的变化。
②由第二段首句内容“接下来的四天在许多有趣的活动中转瞬即逝。”可知，第二段可描写四天中作者经历了哪些有趣的活动及通过这次野营作者领悟到的道理。
2.续写线索：欣赏周围的环境——愤怒转为兴奋——没有手机没那么糟糕——野营中有趣的活动——作者的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.结束：come to an end/draw to an end
②.想起：think of/call to mind
情绪类
①.愤怒：anger/wrath/ indignation
②.坏的：bad/terrible/awful
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. The sight that met my startled eyes nearly took my breath away. （由关系代词that引导限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]. When the weekend came to an end, I realized I hadn’t thought of my phone once. （由when引导时间状语从句）
