6．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Eric threw himself on the sofa, sighing. Mother's Day was approaching, but he didn't have a present. “How can I buy a present without any money?” he thought.
Eric picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch. He noticed a large advertisement on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring a contest (比赛). "Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree (疯狂购物) for her," said the advertisement.
"This is perfect!" thought Eric. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.
"My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters. And she gives me the best hug, but never in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging my mom."
Eric liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his bed. He ran to the mailbox with his entry (参赛作品) . "Mom will love having a shopping spree," he thought.
Eric checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days went by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mother's Day. Eric still hadn't heard anything about the contest.
"What am I going to do now?" he wondered. He didn't have a present, and he didn't have a shopping spree. And he still didn't have money.
He had to think of something. Eric closed his eyes and curled his toes and thought hard.
注意：
1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Suddenly he had an idea.
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Paragraph 2:
The next morning Eric handed his present to his mom.
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【答案】Paragraph1:
Suddenly he had an idea. He fumbled in his drawers and fortunately found a piece of delicate and fragrant paper. He sat down straight on his chair, and began to write a letter in his best handwriting as a Mother’s Day present. “Dear mom, I’m writing this to tell you that you are the best mother in the world...” With a sincere heart, Eric finished the letter and sealed it in an envelope, his lips curving into a smile.
Paragraph2:
The next morning Eric handed his present to his mom. Finishing reading the letter, his mom swept him into her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of him. “Thank you, my dear!” She sniffed, hugging Eric more tightly. Leaning against his mother’s shoulder, Eric slowly explained why he chose to write a letter as a gift. After hearing the reason, his mom gently combed her fingers through his hair, saying, “To me, your letter is better than a thousand shopping sprees.” Hugging each other, they felt blissful as if they were in possession of everything. Indeed, love should be made known to loved ones.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小男孩Eric不知道怎么才能不花钱给妈妈送母亲节礼物，这时，他在报纸上看到一则广告——告诉我们你妈妈的特别之处，为她赢得一个购物狂欢。Eric立刻行动，写下妈妈的特别之处，然后邮寄出去，Eric焦急地等着结果。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然他有了一个主意。”可知，第一段可描写Eric给他母亲写了一封信作为母亲节的礼物。要详细描写信件的内容。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上Eric把礼物递给了他的妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈在读完信件的反应以及Eric解释了写信的原因。
2.续写线索：有主意——写信——送信——感动——拥抱
3.词汇激活
行为类：
①开始做某事：begin to do sth./ start to do sth./ set about doing sth.
②完成：finish/complete/accomplish
③解释：explain/account for/ make clear
情绪类：
①真诚的：sincere/ genuine/ hearty
②幸福的：blissful /happy/ beatific
[高分句型1] With a sincere heart, Eric finished the letter and sealed it in an envelope, his lips curving into a smile. (运用独立主格结构)
[高分句型2] Leaning against his mother’s shoulder, Eric slowly explained why he chose to write a letter as a gift.(现在分词短语作伴随状语及why引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] Hugging each other, they felt blissful as if they were in possession of everything.(现在分词作状语及虚拟语气)
Eric threw himself on the sofa, sighing. Mother's Day was approaching, but he didn't have a present. “How can I buy a present without any money?” he thought.
Eric picked up the newspaper that was lying on the couch. He noticed a large advertisement on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring a contest (比赛). "Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree (疯狂购物) for her," said the advertisement.
"This is perfect!" thought Eric. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.
"My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters. And she gives me the best hug, but never in front of my friends, who would laugh at me for hugging my mom."
Eric liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his bed. He ran to the mailbox with his entry (参赛作品) . "Mom will love having a shopping spree," he thought.
Eric checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days went by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mother's Day. Eric still hadn't heard anything about the contest.
"What am I going to do now?" he wondered. He didn't have a present, and he didn't have a shopping spree. And he still didn't have money.
He had to think of something. Eric closed his eyes and curled his toes and thought hard.
注意：
1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Suddenly he had an idea.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
The next morning Eric handed his present to his mom.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Paragraph1:
Suddenly he had an idea. He fumbled in his drawers and fortunately found a piece of delicate and fragrant paper. He sat down straight on his chair, and began to write a letter in his best handwriting as a Mother’s Day present. “Dear mom, I’m writing this to tell you that you are the best mother in the world...” With a sincere heart, Eric finished the letter and sealed it in an envelope, his lips curving into a smile.
Paragraph2:
The next morning Eric handed his present to his mom. Finishing reading the letter, his mom swept him into her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of him. “Thank you, my dear!” She sniffed, hugging Eric more tightly. Leaning against his mother’s shoulder, Eric slowly explained why he chose to write a letter as a gift. After hearing the reason, his mom gently combed her fingers through his hair, saying, “To me, your letter is better than a thousand shopping sprees.” Hugging each other, they felt blissful as if they were in possession of everything. Indeed, love should be made known to loved ones.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小男孩Eric不知道怎么才能不花钱给妈妈送母亲节礼物，这时，他在报纸上看到一则广告——告诉我们你妈妈的特别之处，为她赢得一个购物狂欢。Eric立刻行动，写下妈妈的特别之处，然后邮寄出去，Eric焦急地等着结果。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然他有了一个主意。”可知，第一段可描写Eric给他母亲写了一封信作为母亲节的礼物。要详细描写信件的内容。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上Eric把礼物递给了他的妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈在读完信件的反应以及Eric解释了写信的原因。
2.续写线索：有主意——写信——送信——感动——拥抱
3.词汇激活
行为类：
①开始做某事：begin to do sth./ start to do sth./ set about doing sth.
②完成：finish/complete/accomplish
③解释：explain/account for/ make clear
情绪类：
①真诚的：sincere/ genuine/ hearty
②幸福的：blissful /happy/ beatific
[高分句型1] With a sincere heart, Eric finished the letter and sealed it in an envelope, his lips curving into a smile. (运用独立主格结构)
[高分句型2] Leaning against his mother’s shoulder, Eric slowly explained why he chose to write a letter as a gift.(现在分词短语作伴随状语及why引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3] Hugging each other, they felt blissful as if they were in possession of everything.(现在分词作状语及虚拟语气)
