4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Taylor opened her sleepy eyes and looked out of the window at the foggy field below. “NO!” she cried, now fully awake. Buttermilk the cow was on Mama’s daisy land. I must have forgotten to lock the gate last night, Taylor thought as she pulled a sweatshirt over her head. Mama was planning to sell daisy bouquets(花束) at the fair next week. But Buttermilk was eating the flowers.
Taylor hurried outside and grabbed the lead rope hanging on the porch. “Why can’t you stay in the field?” she called to Buttermilk as she headed across the yard to the daisy land. Without even looking up at her, Buttermilk stood nipping(啃咬) tender flowers off their stems(茎). “When I grow up, I’ll be an artist and paint pictures all day,” Taylor thought. “I’ll never own a cow. Too much trouble.”
Just as Taylor was about to snap(扣住) the lead rope onto Buttermilk’s collar, the family dog, Red, rounded the corner of the house. The cow couldn’t stand Red. Buttermilk took off, tearing through the daisies across the yard. She finally ran through the open gate and into the field. “Thank goodness!” Taylor said as she closed the gate and secured the land.
She turned to look at the flower garden. Most of the daisies were either eaten or ruined. Mama came out of the house. “What’s going on?” She asked. She looked sadly at her garden. “I forgot to lock the gate,” Taylor said. I’m so sorry.”“I know you are.” Mama sighed and gave Taylor a hug. “You learned an important lesson today.”
Taylor’s heart was heavy as she went back into the house. She had to think of a way to make it up to her mother. A painting on the wall caught Taylor’s eye. “That’s it.” She smiled.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Taylor raced upstairs.
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Paragraph 2:
The morning of the fair, Dad loaded daisy bouquets into the van.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Taylor raced upstairs. She grabbed her art supplies, sat down at her desk and looked out of the window at the remaining daisies below. As her brush moved smoothly across the paper, daisies came alive. Totally lost in painting, Taylor made one painting after another. To keep it a secret, every day Taylor locked herself in her room, committed to painting more, which Buttermilk couldn’t eat any more. Of course, never had she forgotten to lock the gate since then. By the end of the week, she had completed two dozen paintings. Appreciating her great masterpieces, she couldn’t contain her excitement, jumping and clapping, “I made it.”
Paragraph2:
The morning of the fair, Dad loaded daisy bouquets into the van. The daisy was only half the number Mama usually had. “Anyway, it’s still worth taking them,” Mama murmured, her face clouding over with sadness. “Mama, I have a surprise for you upstairs.” Out hurried Taylor, who exclaimed at the top of her lung excitedly. Mama managed a weak smile. “Really? Let’s see it.” Instantly they reached Taylor’s bedroom, Taylor opened the door. What greeted them were daisy paintings everywhere, bright and cheerful in the morning light. “Wow,” said Mama, unable to utter more words. “Do you think anyone will buy them, Mama?” “Oh, yes, sweetie. I’m sure they will. And you have a better lesson than I expected.” Mama smiled.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了泰勒从小就下决心长大了不会养奶牛，而是要当一名艺术家，整天画画。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“泰勒跑上楼。”可知，第一段可描写她抓起美术用品，坐在书桌前，望着窗外剩下的雏菊，就开始画起来。
②由第二段首句内容“集市的那天早上，爸爸把几束雏菊花装进面包车。”可知，第二段可描写对爸爸装进面包车的雏菊的评价。
2.续写线索：把自己锁在屋里——画画——成功——集市卖雏菊——雏菊画——开心
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
捕获，抓住：grab/catch/capture
完成：complete/finish
到达：reach/arrive /get to
情绪类
难过：with sadness /sorrow
愉快的：cheerful /pleasant/joyful
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As her brush moved smoothly across the paper, daisies came alive.（由连接词as引导原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] Appreciating her great masterpieces, she couldn’t contain her excitement, jumping and clapping, “I made it.”（现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型3] What greeted them were daisy paintings everywhere, bright and cheerful in the morning light.（what引导主语从句
Taylor opened her sleepy eyes and looked out of the window at the foggy field below. “NO!” she cried, now fully awake. Buttermilk the cow was on Mama’s daisy land. I must have forgotten to lock the gate last night, Taylor thought as she pulled a sweatshirt over her head. Mama was planning to sell daisy bouquets(花束) at the fair next week. But Buttermilk was eating the flowers.
Taylor hurried outside and grabbed the lead rope hanging on the porch. “Why can’t you stay in the field?” she called to Buttermilk as she headed across the yard to the daisy land. Without even looking up at her, Buttermilk stood nipping(啃咬) tender flowers off their stems(茎). “When I grow up, I’ll be an artist and paint pictures all day,” Taylor thought. “I’ll never own a cow. Too much trouble.”
Just as Taylor was about to snap(扣住) the lead rope onto Buttermilk’s collar, the family dog, Red, rounded the corner of the house. The cow couldn’t stand Red. Buttermilk took off, tearing through the daisies across the yard. She finally ran through the open gate and into the field. “Thank goodness!” Taylor said as she closed the gate and secured the land.
She turned to look at the flower garden. Most of the daisies were either eaten or ruined. Mama came out of the house. “What’s going on?” She asked. She looked sadly at her garden. “I forgot to lock the gate,” Taylor said. I’m so sorry.”“I know you are.” Mama sighed and gave Taylor a hug. “You learned an important lesson today.”
Taylor’s heart was heavy as she went back into the house. She had to think of a way to make it up to her mother. A painting on the wall caught Taylor’s eye. “That’s it.” She smiled.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Taylor raced upstairs.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
The morning of the fair, Dad loaded daisy bouquets into the van.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Paragraph 1:
Taylor raced upstairs. She grabbed her art supplies, sat down at her desk and looked out of the window at the remaining daisies below. As her brush moved smoothly across the paper, daisies came alive. Totally lost in painting, Taylor made one painting after another. To keep it a secret, every day Taylor locked herself in her room, committed to painting more, which Buttermilk couldn’t eat any more. Of course, never had she forgotten to lock the gate since then. By the end of the week, she had completed two dozen paintings. Appreciating her great masterpieces, she couldn’t contain her excitement, jumping and clapping, “I made it.”
Paragraph2:
The morning of the fair, Dad loaded daisy bouquets into the van. The daisy was only half the number Mama usually had. “Anyway, it’s still worth taking them,” Mama murmured, her face clouding over with sadness. “Mama, I have a surprise for you upstairs.” Out hurried Taylor, who exclaimed at the top of her lung excitedly. Mama managed a weak smile. “Really? Let’s see it.” Instantly they reached Taylor’s bedroom, Taylor opened the door. What greeted them were daisy paintings everywhere, bright and cheerful in the morning light. “Wow,” said Mama, unable to utter more words. “Do you think anyone will buy them, Mama?” “Oh, yes, sweetie. I’m sure they will. And you have a better lesson than I expected.” Mama smiled.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了泰勒从小就下决心长大了不会养奶牛，而是要当一名艺术家，整天画画。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“泰勒跑上楼。”可知，第一段可描写她抓起美术用品，坐在书桌前，望着窗外剩下的雏菊，就开始画起来。
②由第二段首句内容“集市的那天早上，爸爸把几束雏菊花装进面包车。”可知，第二段可描写对爸爸装进面包车的雏菊的评价。
2.续写线索：把自己锁在屋里——画画——成功——集市卖雏菊——雏菊画——开心
3.词汇激活（一个词汇要写出相近的表达）
行为类
捕获，抓住：grab/catch/capture
完成：complete/finish
到达：reach/arrive /get to
情绪类
难过：with sadness /sorrow
愉快的：cheerful /pleasant/joyful
【点睛】
[高分句型1] As her brush moved smoothly across the paper, daisies came alive.（由连接词as引导原因状语从句）
[高分句型2] Appreciating her great masterpieces, she couldn’t contain her excitement, jumping and clapping, “I made it.”（现在分词作伴随状语）
[高分句型3] What greeted them were daisy paintings everywhere, bright and cheerful in the morning light.（what引导主语从句
