One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment. The reason was that my parents

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One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment. The reason was that my parents had both gone for a ball party and had left me in charge of everything.1 was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching TV. All of a sudden, the doorbell rang. Ding Dong! Ding Dong! My younger brother had rushed to the door before I decided to answer the door. We both thought that our parents had come home. As a result, he unlocked the door and opened it.
Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots. He looked no different from other people and he said that he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home so he could talk with them.
Without any thinking, my brother said, “No.” He asked if we would like to buy some comic books, which he was selling. I quickly explained to him that we were not supposed to buy anything without our parents’ permission. However, it seemed that he was not willing to follow my advice and he had an intention to enter our house.
Then, I realized something terrible would happen. As I was about to close the door, he forced his way into our house. He took out a knife and forced me to tie up my brother’s hands with some rope which he took out from his pocket. I tied up my brother’s hands but I tied it in a special way so he could untie himself as we often did. The man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen.
Soon, he went upstairs to search the bedroom for something valuable. I managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on his hands. He then untied me. I rushed to the telephone to call the police, but line was dead.
注意:1.所续写的词数应为150左右;  
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已给出;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出所用关键词。
Paragraph 1:
The doors were all locked from the outside and what’s more, I did not have the keys.
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Paragragh2:
Just at the same time our parents came back home.
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答案Paragraph 1:
The doors were all locked from the outside and what’s more, I did not have the keys. But luckily, the man forgot to lock the kitchen window. Both my brother and I managed to get out of the house through the window and we ran to the nearby police station and asked them for help. The police arrived at our house as soon as possible. And as a result, the man was caught.
Paragraph 2:
Just at the same time our parents came back home. The police asked my family to go to the police station. It was there that the police told us the man was a wanted robber pretending to sell comic books and they had been looking for him for a long time. The police praised my brother and me for our bravery. After we went back home, I told my parents the whole story about the robbery. They were thankful that we were not hurt, but they scolded me for not stopping my brother from opening the door for strangers. I learned a lesson on safety and responsibility.

【分析】
本文讲述了一天,作者和弟弟单独在家,父母都去参加舞会了,突然,有人按门铃。我们认为是父母回来了,不假思索地打开了门,门外站着一个穿着黑色雨衣和黑色胶靴的陌生男人。在他得知我们的父母不在家后,强行进入了我们家,并用绳子把我和弟弟绑了起来,锁在厨房里,然后他去其他房间搜索贵重物品。在我解开绳子后,试图报警,但电话不通。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“门都是从外面锁着的,而且我没有钥匙。”可知,第一段可描写我和弟弟接下来的自救行动及我们是如何获得成功的。
②由第二段首句内容“就在同一时间,我们的父母回家了。”可知,第二段可描写抓住男人后,警察和父母对我们行为的评价以及我的感悟。
2.续写线索:从窗户逃生——报警——男子被抓——男子来历——父母的表扬——我的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.从……出去,逃脱:get out of/escape from
②.向某人求助:ask sb. for help/turn to sb. for help
③.到达:arrive at (in)/get to/reach
情绪类
①.幸运地:luckily/fortunately
②.勇气:bravery/courage
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. It was there that the police told us the man was a wanted robber pretending to sell comic books and they had been looking for him for a long time. (运用了强调句,强调地点状语“there”)
[高分句型2]. They were thankful that we were not hurt, but they scolded me for not stopping my brother from opening the door for strangers. (由that引导宾语从句)
 
 
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