2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
At first, Michael Surrell didn’t see the black smoke or flames shooting from the windows of his neighbors’ home. He and his wife had just parked around the comer from their own house when they got a call from one of his daughters: “The house next door is on fire!” He went to investigate. That’s when he saw two women and a girl screaming on the porch (门廊).
“The baby’s in there!” one of the women cried. Though the fire department had been called, Surrell, then 64, immediately ran inside. “The baby” was 8-year-old Tiara Roberts, the woman’s granddaughter and a playmate of Surrell’s three youngest kids.
Entering the burning house was like running into a bucket of black paint. The thick smoke caused Surrell to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible for him to breathe. The conditions would have been dangerous for anyone, but for Surrell, who has chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (慢性阻塞性肺病), they were life-threatening.
After a few minutes in the smoke-filled house, he went outside to catch his breath. “Where is Tiara?” he asked desperately.
“The second floor,” her aunt shouted back.
Surrell knew he couldn’t hold his breath for long. Taking a deep breath, he went in a second time. The darkness was overwhelming. Yet because the house had a similar layout (布局) to his, he found the stairs and made it to the second floor. He turned to the right and was met by intense heat. He was already out of breath.
“Baby girl, where are you?” His throat and lungs burned as if he’d breathed in fire instead of the smoke in the air. Every blink stung (使疼痛) his eyes. All he could hear was the cracking and popping of burning wood. Then a soft moan emerged. Still unable to see, Surrell fell to his knees on the hot wood floor. He crawled toward the sound, feeling around for any sign of the girl. A terrible thought crossed his mind: I’m probably gonna die up here.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Finally Surrell touched something.
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Paragraph 2:
Surrell hugged Tiara tight, saying “Uncle’s got you,” and then passed out.
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【答案】Paragraph 1
Finally, he touched something –a shoe, then an ankle. He pulled Tiara toward him. Her body was weak and she wasn’t breathing. He hugged her into his arms and stood. He felt the heat of the flames on his cheeks. Turning, he fought through the smoke and ran blindly into the blackness. Surrell put Tiara down on the porch. He started CPR the first time he’d ever done so. Soon she opened her eyes and took a breath on her own. Surrell’s throat closed off.
Paragraph 2
Surrell woke up in the hospital a couple of days later. He suffered severe burns to his windpipe and the upper portion of his lungs. He spent over a week in the hospital. The fire worsened Surrell’s pulmonary condition, and he feels the effects even two years later. As a result, he takes extra medication that helps open his airways. “It’s a small price to pay,” he says, “I’d do it again in a heartbeat. Wouldn’t give it a second thought.
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。讲述了萨里尔在邻居遇到火灾时，不顾自身安危冲进火海救人的故事。虽然因此病情加剧，可是他并不觉得后悔。
【详解】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“萨里尔摸到了什么东西”可知，第一段可描写萨里尔找到了女孩并救助的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“几天后萨里尔在医院醒来了”可知第二段可描写萨里尔救人后在医院救治情况，以及事情结束后的感悟。
2.续写线索
找到女孩——抢救——醒来——萨里尔住院——救治——感触
3.词汇激活
行为类
①停车：stop/park/pull up
②跑：run/rush
③爬：crawl/climb
情绪类
①哭：cry/weep/sob
②可怕的：terrible/horrible/frightening/scary
【点睛】
[高分句型1] He started CPR the first time he’d ever done so.（引用了the first time引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] It’s a small price to pay（运用了不定式作后置定语）
At first, Michael Surrell didn’t see the black smoke or flames shooting from the windows of his neighbors’ home. He and his wife had just parked around the comer from their own house when they got a call from one of his daughters: “The house next door is on fire!” He went to investigate. That’s when he saw two women and a girl screaming on the porch (门廊).
“The baby’s in there!” one of the women cried. Though the fire department had been called, Surrell, then 64, immediately ran inside. “The baby” was 8-year-old Tiara Roberts, the woman’s granddaughter and a playmate of Surrell’s three youngest kids.
Entering the burning house was like running into a bucket of black paint. The thick smoke caused Surrell to stumble blindly around, burned his eyes, and made it impossible for him to breathe. The conditions would have been dangerous for anyone, but for Surrell, who has chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (慢性阻塞性肺病), they were life-threatening.
After a few minutes in the smoke-filled house, he went outside to catch his breath. “Where is Tiara?” he asked desperately.
“The second floor,” her aunt shouted back.
Surrell knew he couldn’t hold his breath for long. Taking a deep breath, he went in a second time. The darkness was overwhelming. Yet because the house had a similar layout (布局) to his, he found the stairs and made it to the second floor. He turned to the right and was met by intense heat. He was already out of breath.
“Baby girl, where are you?” His throat and lungs burned as if he’d breathed in fire instead of the smoke in the air. Every blink stung (使疼痛) his eyes. All he could hear was the cracking and popping of burning wood. Then a soft moan emerged. Still unable to see, Surrell fell to his knees on the hot wood floor. He crawled toward the sound, feeling around for any sign of the girl. A terrible thought crossed his mind: I’m probably gonna die up here.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Finally Surrell touched something.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Surrell hugged Tiara tight, saying “Uncle’s got you,” and then passed out.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Paragraph 1
Finally, he touched something –a shoe, then an ankle. He pulled Tiara toward him. Her body was weak and she wasn’t breathing. He hugged her into his arms and stood. He felt the heat of the flames on his cheeks. Turning, he fought through the smoke and ran blindly into the blackness. Surrell put Tiara down on the porch. He started CPR the first time he’d ever done so. Soon she opened her eyes and took a breath on her own. Surrell’s throat closed off.
Paragraph 2
Surrell woke up in the hospital a couple of days later. He suffered severe burns to his windpipe and the upper portion of his lungs. He spent over a week in the hospital. The fire worsened Surrell’s pulmonary condition, and he feels the effects even two years later. As a result, he takes extra medication that helps open his airways. “It’s a small price to pay,” he says, “I’d do it again in a heartbeat. Wouldn’t give it a second thought.
【分析】
这是一篇记叙文。讲述了萨里尔在邻居遇到火灾时，不顾自身安危冲进火海救人的故事。虽然因此病情加剧，可是他并不觉得后悔。
【详解】
1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“萨里尔摸到了什么东西”可知，第一段可描写萨里尔找到了女孩并救助的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“几天后萨里尔在医院醒来了”可知第二段可描写萨里尔救人后在医院救治情况，以及事情结束后的感悟。
2.续写线索
找到女孩——抢救——醒来——萨里尔住院——救治——感触
3.词汇激活
行为类
①停车：stop/park/pull up
②跑：run/rush
③爬：crawl/climb
情绪类
①哭：cry/weep/sob
②可怕的：terrible/horrible/frightening/scary
【点睛】
[高分句型1] He started CPR the first time he’d ever done so.（引用了the first time引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型2] It’s a small price to pay（运用了不定式作后置定语）
