During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened

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During this past year, I’ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK (千斤顶), and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw (锯子) from the truck and cut a section out of a big log(圆木)on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron(拆轮胎的扳手). No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn’t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
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When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I’d had lunch.
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After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
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答案When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I'd had lunch. I told her I hadn't had lunch because I'd been waiting here for help for nearly three hours. The girl said they didn't have lunch either. She suggested to her parents that we have lunch together. Their truck happened to have some food and some things for the picnic. So we ate together in a vacant lot by the side of the road. During that time, I told about what had happened to me and how I felt. They shared interesting stories about their lives in Mexico and on fruit farms. After lunch, the girl's mother put a paper bag of fruit in my jeep. I showed my gratitude again and we said goodbye to each other.
After they left, I got into my jeep and opened the paper bag. There are some delicate fruits in the paper bag. I was surprised to find the money I had quietly left them. At the same time, there was a note written by the girl, which read “We are very happy to be able to help you. We have encountered many difficulties and been disappointed. But we met a lot of helpful people, which made us feel very warm. To help others with one's own ability is also a kind of lifting a finger. The beauty of life comes from these lifting a finger. I hope you have a good life and a happy mood. ” This made me very moved, and I would try my best to help more people in the future to make our world more beautiful and warmer.

【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了去年作者汽车出现了三次故障,大多数人都懒得帮忙,作者对此感到很厌烦。有一次,他的汽车又出故障了。他在路边求助了接近3个小时,但是没有人停下来帮忙。就在打算放弃的时候,一个过路的墨西哥家庭停下来,提供了帮助。
【详解】
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“就在我要说再见的时候,女孩问我是否吃过午饭了。”可知,第一段可描写作者和墨西哥家庭一块儿吃午饭的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“在他们离开后,我上了吉普车,打开纸袋。”可知,第二段可描写作者在这一家人离开后,在纸袋里发现什么,以及自己的感受。
2.续写线索:吃午餐——交流——感谢——回家发现东西——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①交流: talk /communicate/chat
②遇到:encounter/meet/come across
③发现:find/discover
情绪类
①感谢: show one's gratitude/ showing one's appreciation/ be grateful
②开心的:happy/glad/delighted
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I told her I hadn't had lunch because I'd been waiting here for help for nearly three hours.(由because引导的原因状语从句)
[高分句型2].But we met a lot of helpful people, which made us feel very warm.(由关系代词which 引导非限制性定语从句)
 
 
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