10．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
"Almost showtime!" Ms. Tuttle called. "Costumes on and smiles out!"
I frowned at myself in the dressing-room mirror. I was wearing white tights and a white swim cap that hid most of my hair. I was one of 10 snowflakes in my dance school's Winter Wonderland show. I'd learned in science class that no two snowflakes are alike, but all of us snowflakes were wearing the same costume.
"Grandma, I really don't feel like being in the show," I said.
Grandma Lani looked up from my ballet shoe. "Why, my grandchild?”Grandma Lani is Japanese American, and she has always lived in Hawaii. "You love to dance."
I used to love to dance. Then Ms. Tuttle gave the part of the Snow Queen to Christine Abrams. Christine got to wear a feathery skirt that fluttered like a cloud every time she twirled（旋转）. And she got to do a dance onstage all by herself.
The snowflakes just ran to look like a blustery snowstorm. I sighed. "I don't like our dance. And no one would notice if I wasn't there. There are so many of us.”
“I would notice. So would your parents.” Grandma paused as Christine walked toward us holding a basketful of pretty snowflake ornaments（装饰品）.
Christine handed one to me. "Break a leg, Jack" she said, smiling. That means good luck. The ornament had my name on it.
“Thanks. You too,” I said. It was nice of her to paint everyone's name like that.
Grandma Lani smiled at Christine. "What a beautiful costume!” Christine left, her skirt fluttering behind her.
I hung my head. Grandma took my hand. “What's bothering my Jack?”
“You came all this way,” I whispered. "And you won't be able to tell me apart from the other snowflakes.”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Grandma was about to speak when something outside the window caught her eye.
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Paragraph 2:
We watched the snow for a few more minutes, even though my toes were turning to ice.
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【答案】One possible version
Grandma was about to speak when something outside the window caught her eye. She grabbed my hand and my coat and pulled me out of the dressing room. It was snowing. Big swirling flakes. Grandma gasped and I suddenly thought of something. "Grandma, have you ever seen snow before?” "No, my Jack. In Hawaii, it snows only on the very tops of mountains." I had seen snow lots of times, but now I tried to see it differently. Like it was new. I saw snowflakes twisting through the air in different directions, sparkling and winking at us. So many snowflakes coming together to create something magical.
We watched the snow for a few more minutes, even though my toes were turning to ice. Then the wind settled down and the last flakes melted away. "Good-bye. "Grandma whispered to the sky. "I don't know when I'll see something like that again." "I do," I said. I took Grandma Lani's hand and pulled her back inside. When the stage lights came up and the music started, I spun and ran with all of the other snowflakes. I didn't care if Grandma Lani could notice me. I was helping her see a snowstorm!
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在舞蹈中扮演一个普通的小雪花，穿着和别人一样的服装，作者因为自己的不起眼而不愿意参加演出。奶奶一直耐心地安慰和陪伴作者，在奶奶的感慨下，作者高兴地为奶奶去完成自己的角色。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“奶奶刚要说话，窗外的什么东西吸引了她的目光。”可知，第一段可描写作者和奶奶一起去外边看下雪，看真正的雪花飞舞的情景。
②由第二段首句内容“我们又看了几分钟的雪，尽管我的脚趾头快结冰了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和奶奶一起看完雪花的感受和作者情绪的改变。
2.续写线索：看雪花飞舞——感受雪花的神奇——雪花融化——奶奶遗憾——作者为奶奶去飞舞
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抓住：grab/ grasp /seize
②.小声说：whisper/ murmur/ speak in a low voice
③.亮起来：light up/ came up
情绪类
①.神奇的： magical/ miraculous/ mystical
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I don't know when I'll see something like that again.（由连接词when引导的宾语从句作know的宾语）
[高分句型2]. When the stage lights came up and the music started, I spun and ran with all of the other snowflakes. (由连接词when引导的时间状语从句)
"Almost showtime!" Ms. Tuttle called. "Costumes on and smiles out!"
I frowned at myself in the dressing-room mirror. I was wearing white tights and a white swim cap that hid most of my hair. I was one of 10 snowflakes in my dance school's Winter Wonderland show. I'd learned in science class that no two snowflakes are alike, but all of us snowflakes were wearing the same costume.
"Grandma, I really don't feel like being in the show," I said.
Grandma Lani looked up from my ballet shoe. "Why, my grandchild?”Grandma Lani is Japanese American, and she has always lived in Hawaii. "You love to dance."
I used to love to dance. Then Ms. Tuttle gave the part of the Snow Queen to Christine Abrams. Christine got to wear a feathery skirt that fluttered like a cloud every time she twirled（旋转）. And she got to do a dance onstage all by herself.
The snowflakes just ran to look like a blustery snowstorm. I sighed. "I don't like our dance. And no one would notice if I wasn't there. There are so many of us.”
“I would notice. So would your parents.” Grandma paused as Christine walked toward us holding a basketful of pretty snowflake ornaments（装饰品）.
Christine handed one to me. "Break a leg, Jack" she said, smiling. That means good luck. The ornament had my name on it.
“Thanks. You too,” I said. It was nice of her to paint everyone's name like that.
Grandma Lani smiled at Christine. "What a beautiful costume!” Christine left, her skirt fluttering behind her.
I hung my head. Grandma took my hand. “What's bothering my Jack?”
“You came all this way,” I whispered. "And you won't be able to tell me apart from the other snowflakes.”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Grandma was about to speak when something outside the window caught her eye.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
We watched the snow for a few more minutes, even though my toes were turning to ice.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version
Grandma was about to speak when something outside the window caught her eye. She grabbed my hand and my coat and pulled me out of the dressing room. It was snowing. Big swirling flakes. Grandma gasped and I suddenly thought of something. "Grandma, have you ever seen snow before?” "No, my Jack. In Hawaii, it snows only on the very tops of mountains." I had seen snow lots of times, but now I tried to see it differently. Like it was new. I saw snowflakes twisting through the air in different directions, sparkling and winking at us. So many snowflakes coming together to create something magical.
We watched the snow for a few more minutes, even though my toes were turning to ice. Then the wind settled down and the last flakes melted away. "Good-bye. "Grandma whispered to the sky. "I don't know when I'll see something like that again." "I do," I said. I took Grandma Lani's hand and pulled her back inside. When the stage lights came up and the music started, I spun and ran with all of the other snowflakes. I didn't care if Grandma Lani could notice me. I was helping her see a snowstorm!
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在舞蹈中扮演一个普通的小雪花，穿着和别人一样的服装，作者因为自己的不起眼而不愿意参加演出。奶奶一直耐心地安慰和陪伴作者，在奶奶的感慨下，作者高兴地为奶奶去完成自己的角色。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“奶奶刚要说话，窗外的什么东西吸引了她的目光。”可知，第一段可描写作者和奶奶一起去外边看下雪，看真正的雪花飞舞的情景。
②由第二段首句内容“我们又看了几分钟的雪，尽管我的脚趾头快结冰了。”可知，第二段可描写作者和奶奶一起看完雪花的感受和作者情绪的改变。
2.续写线索：看雪花飞舞——感受雪花的神奇——雪花融化——奶奶遗憾——作者为奶奶去飞舞
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抓住：grab/ grasp /seize
②.小声说：whisper/ murmur/ speak in a low voice
③.亮起来：light up/ came up
情绪类
①.神奇的： magical/ miraculous/ mystical
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. I don't know when I'll see something like that again.（由连接词when引导的宾语从句作know的宾语）
[高分句型2]. When the stage lights came up and the music started, I spun and ran with all of the other snowflakes. (由连接词when引导的时间状语从句)
