（八）【2020 •泰州市】
八、书面表达
81.假定你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Mike留言：
1.回忆你俩之间一段难忘的经历（如互相帮助、互相鼓励或一起参加某项活动等），并谈谈你的感受；
2.你对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；
3.你对Mike的祝福和期待。
要求：
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【写作思路】
这是一张留言条。三年的初中生活就要结束，要求给好友Mike留言，回忆难忘的经历并谈谈你的感受；提出对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；对Mike的祝福和期待。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye.
We have studied in our school for three years. We had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, you have kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends. I’ve learned a lot from you.
It’s important to keep healthy. I hope you can keep doing sports every day. You can take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. I think sports can make you energetic.
I wish you can become better and better in everything. I am looking forward to your success.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、二人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述最值得回忆的故事时要用一般过去时，其它用一般现在时；内容包含四部分：第一部分开篇点题；第二部分讲述难忘的一件事情及自己的感想；第三部分对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；第四部分对Mike的祝福和期待。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点：
短语：say goodbye；do well in；do well in；Since then；as soon as；have a talk with sb；learn a lot from；keep healthy；take part in；in order to；look forward to。
句型：①让步状语从句 No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.
②时间状语从句 when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.
As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well.
③宾语从句 I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends.
八、书面表达
81.假定你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Mike留言：
1.回忆你俩之间一段难忘的经历（如互相帮助、互相鼓励或一起参加某项活动等），并谈谈你的感受；
2.你对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；
3.你对Mike的祝福和期待。
要求：
1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【写作思路】
这是一张留言条。三年的初中生活就要结束，要求给好友Mike留言，回忆难忘的经历并谈谈你的感受；提出对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；对Mike的祝福和期待。
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
How time flies! It’s time to say goodbye.
We have studied in our school for three years. We had so many memories in three years’ life. One of them impressed me very much. I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, you have kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends. I’ve learned a lot from you.
It’s important to keep healthy. I hope you can keep doing sports every day. You can take part in all kinds of sports in order to become stronger. I think sports can make you energetic.
I wish you can become better and better in everything. I am looking forward to your success.
Yours sincerely,
Li hua
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、二人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述最值得回忆的故事时要用一般过去时，其它用一般现在时；内容包含四部分：第一部分开篇点题；第二部分讲述难忘的一件事情及自己的感想；第三部分对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；第四部分对Mike的祝福和期待。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。
高分亮点：
短语：say goodbye；do well in；do well in；Since then；as soon as；have a talk with sb；learn a lot from；keep healthy；take part in；in order to；look forward to。
句型：①让步状语从句 No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up.
②时间状语从句 when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult.
As soon as you found my problem, you had a talk with me about how to learn English well.
③宾语从句 I think I am so lucky to become one of your best friends.
