66.春去秋来, 四季交替, 你最喜欢什么季节? 请根据以下提示, 以"My favourite season"为题, 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

(五)【2020 •广西北部湾经济】
66.春去秋来, 四季交替, 你最喜欢什么季节? 请根据以下提示, 以"My favourite season"为题, 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
写作要点:
1. 你最喜欢的季节是什么?
2. 它有哪些自然现象?
3. 可以进行哪些体育、休闲活动?
4. 你有哪些感受?
写作要求:
1. 内容必须包含所给的要点, 可适当发挥, 使行文连贯;
2. 语篇完整, 语句通顺, 语法正确, 书写规范;
3. 文中不能出现除题目以外的个人信息, 否则一律不予评分。
My favourite season
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写作思路
该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按记叙文格式写。开头介绍我最喜欢春天;接下来介绍春天的自然现象,可以进行的体育、休闲活动和我的感受;最后鼓励大家一起享受春天。
参考范文
My favourite season
There are four seasons in a year. Of all the seasons, I like spring best.
In spring, the weather is getting warmer and warmer. The trees turn green and the flowers start to come out. We can hear the birds singing happily in the trees. It usually rains lightly and the air is fresh. During this season, there are many outdoor activities, such as going hiking, flying kites and planting trees. I usually go cycling or have a picnic with my parents on weekends. I think these activities are colourful and meaningful.
Spring stands for a new beginning and it is full of hope. Let's enjoy this wonderful season together.

【名师点评】
例文点评:例文采用三段式;用第一或第三人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时,描述春天的天气、自然现象、可以从事的休闲活动时,介绍全面,条理清晰,用连词连接并列成分,文章前后连贯。
高分亮点:
短语:come out;hear sb doing sth;such as;on weekends;be full of。
句型:there be句型;宾语从句;祈使句。
 
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