(六)【2020 •河北省】
56.李硕今年五岁,他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武汉。请根据下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。
say goodbye kiss his mother
receive a warm welcome give her a big hug
注意:(1)短文须包括每幅图片的主要信息,可适当发挥,提示词语供参考;
(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there.
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【写作思路】
本题属于看图作文,题目的开头已给出。要求根据图画内容并结合文字提示,发挥想象来写一篇英语作文。写作时要包含每幅图片的主要信息并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
【参考范文】
Li Shuo is a five-year-old boy. One Sunday afternoon, his mother was going Wuhan to help patients there. His father took him to say goodbye to her. One day, he saw his mother on TV while she was away. He missed her so much that he kissed his mother across the TV screen. When the outbreak was under control, his mother came back with other medical workers. They received a warm welcome. As soon as his mother got home, Li Shuo gave her a big hug. How he misses his mother!
【名师点评】
例文点评:这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,根据图画及文字提示,以一般过去时讲述了李硕的妈妈去武汉抗疫到回来的过程中的几个细节。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
短语:say goodbye to sb.;across the TV screen;be under control;come back;medical workers;receive a warm welcome;give sb. a hug。
句型:while引导的时间状语从句;so ... that引导的结果状语从句;when引导的时间状语从句;as soon as引导的时间状语从句;以how开头的感叹句。
56.李硕今年五岁,他的妈妈疫情期间去支援武汉。请根据下面四幅图片及文字提示写一篇短文。
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