39.从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。

(二)【2020 •北京市】
39.从下面两个题目中任选一题,根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
假如你是李华,你不小心把Peter借给你的书弄丢了。为表达歉意,请用英语给他写一封邮件,告知此事,并提出弥补的办法。
提示词语:lose, make up(弥补), buy, send
提示问题:
What happened to the book?
What will you do to make up for it?
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
写作思路
该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按邮件格式写。开头介绍我写信的目的;接下来介绍我打算如何弥补我的过失;最后希望你能原谅我。
参考范文
Dear Peter,
How are you getting on? I’m writing this email to say sorry, because I lost the book which I borrowed from you a week ago. I want to make up for my error. I will buy the same one from the bookstore and send it to you. What do you think of my method? I hope that you can forgive me. I am looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                                              Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文采用一段式;用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时,用一般将来时介绍我提出的弥补办法,介绍全面,条理清晰,用连词连接并列成分,文章前后连贯。
2.高分亮点:
短语:borrow from;want to do sth;send…to…;look forward to。
句型:定语从句which I borrowed from you a week ago;宾语从句that you can forgive me。


 
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