56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味,像年糕(New Year cake)、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。

(一)【2020 •浙江省温州市】
56.年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭。年夜饭菜肴丰富、美味,像年糕(New Year cake)、鱼等都还带有美好的祝愿。
请以 The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题,写一篇约100词的短文,向外国朋友介绍自己家乡的年夜饭,让他们更好地了解中国丰富多样的文化习俗。
注意:文中不可出现人名。标题已经给出,不计入总词数。
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
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写作思路
这是一篇话题作文。要求根据题目“The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve”和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
参考范文
The Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve
The family dinner on Spring Festival Eve is the most important dinner in traditional Chinese culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner.
There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means "having more than we need". Children all like this family dinner. At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.
It is a Chinese tradition that we have kept for thousands of years.

【名师点评】
例文点评:例文采用三段式;时态以一般现在时为主;将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中,适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解,表达出自己的观点态度。
高分亮点:
短语:get together;all kinds of;For example;thousands of等。
句型:For example, in Wenzhou, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means "having more luck and becoming better in Chinese pronunciation.
At dinner they receive not only best wishes but also lucky money from their parents.
 

 
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