（九）【2019 •江西省】
文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。
写作要点：
I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…)；
2. Reasons (looks, personality品性， ability...)；
3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…).
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80。
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【写作思路】
这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
范文1
I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better.
For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool.
So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks.
范文2
In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like.
A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher. Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person.
For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face.
So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks.
文章讨论了许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章的最后指出：“We need to judge people by what they do, not what they look like.” 你同意文章最后提出的观点吗？对此观点你有何看法？请根据下面提示写一篇英语短文谈谈你的看法，阐述理由，并举例说明。
写作要点：
I. Your opinion (agree/ disagree /…)；
2. Reasons (looks, personality品性， ability...)；
3. An example (yourself/ a person around you/ a famous person/…).
要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 如举自己或身边的人作为例子，不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数不少于80。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇要求根据文章中许多年轻人很在意自己外貌的问题，文章最后提出判断一个人应该根据他做了什么，而不是根据一个人的外貌来判断，对这一观点提出自己的看法。动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用一般现在时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
【参考范文】
范文1
I agree with the opinion. Compared with looks, personality and ability are more important. Because we can’t change our looks easily, but we can decide and control what we do. Thnaks to the kind and hard-working people, our society is becoming better and better.
For example, Ma Yun, a well-known businessman, doesn’t look handsome, but he created Alibaba which has changed our lifestyle and made our life more convenient. He has been doing so much for our society that we all admire him. Because of his contribution to our society, we even think he looks so cool.
So let’s try our best to do more useful things for our society and pay less attentionto our looks.
范文2
In my opinion, I think we need to judge people by both what they do and what they look like.
A person's personality and ability are very important, but for some jobs, looks are also important, such as an actor or an actress, a waiter or a waitress, or even a teacher. Because it's enjoyable to see a good-looking person.
For example, my teachers in my class all teach very well, and they are kind and helpful. All of us like them. But the most popular teacher is my English teacher, because she looks really beautiful. She dresses herself up every day and always has a smile on her face.
So let's try our best to improve our ability, personality and looks.
