近年来,学生意外伤害事故频发,给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生,我们该如何有效的自我保护,免受伤害呢?

(六)【2019 •四川省南充市】
近年来,学生意外伤害事故频发,给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生,我们该如何有效的自我保护,免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛,请你根据下表提示,写一篇短文参赛吧。
How to Keep Safe
Traffic traffic lights, electric bikes(电动车)…
Swimming rivers, swimming pool…
Internet ID number, code(密码), unhealthy websites…
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要求:
1.短文必须包含提示中所有内容,并适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4. 词数:80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
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After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.
写作思路
近年来,学生意外伤害事故频发,给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生,我们该如何有效的自我保护,免受伤害呢? 我市正在举行以“How to Keep Safe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛,给出的材料比较全面,我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
参考范文
How to Keep Safe
Do you know that many dangerous things will happen if we are not careful enough? As a student, how to keep safe is very important.
First, we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road. And we shouldn't ride the electric bicycles. Second, we shouldn't swim in the river because it's dangerous. We can go swimming with our parents in a swimming pool. Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet. We shouldn't surf unhealthy websites. What's more, we shouldn't go out with friends without our parents' permission. If we are in danger, we can ask for help from our parents or teachers, even police.
After all, life is very important. We should learn something about self-protection so that we can protect ourselves well.

【名师点评】
文中用到了非常好的句型:we should obey the traffic rules. When the lights are red, we shouldn't cross the road.;Third, we shouldn't tell strangers our ID number or code when we are surfing the Internet.这些给文章增色不少。
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