随着我们不断成长,生活不仅给予了我们许多快乐时光,同时伴随不少烦恼.仔细阅读下面小华写给英语报社的信,结合自己的实际,运用所学知识

(二十三)【2019 •四川省达州市】
随着我们不断成长,生活不仅给予了我们许多快乐时光,同时伴随不少烦恼.仔细阅读下面小华写给英语报社的信,结合自己的实际,运用所学知识,请你以编辑的名义,就他的频恼在回信中给出好的建议.
Dear sir,
I'm Xiaohua,15,a middle school student. I have some problems to tell you, my parents always say to me, "Study, study, do homework, do your homework. " when I come back. However,they don' t know how hard I study at school from 7:00 am to 8:30 p.m. every day.
And last Sunday, my 3﹣year﹣old brother troubled me again and again while I was studying for the coming exam. I really wanted to get better grades, so I couldn't stand him any more, I shouted at him in anger, thus he cried loudly. Then my mother came in, she blamed me without asking "why".
My eyes were full of tears at that time. It was not my fault. Why did she treat me like that?Didn't mother love me? After all. I'm also her birth child, My dear editor, what can I do? Could you give me some suggestions?
Sincerely,
Xiaohua
要求:
(1)卷面整洁(无污迹),书写工整(有美感).
(2)全文字数不少于90词.书信开头和结尾已给出,不计入单词总数.
(3)条理清楚,句式规范,标点符号和大小写使用正确.
(4)内容尽量就小华的烦恼给出好的建议,并适当发挥:文中不能出现真实的人名、地名.
Dear Xiaohua,
I'm glad to receive your letter. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents.But now, I fully understand them. ________________________________________________________________
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I hope these help!
Tony
参考范文
Dear Xiaohua,
I'm glad to receive your letter. I have ever had the same experience. I even had a fight with my parents.But now, I fully understand them.(开篇表明自己也碰到过)
First,As parents,their dream is that one day you can get good grades.So they put emphasis on homework every day.Why not talk with your parents?【高分句型一】 you can tell them that you finished your homework if you really did it.Or you can help them do some housework after school.Second,For your little brother,He is just a baby.He is glad to see you after your coming back from school.So  he wants to play with you.Why don't you play with him for a few minutes.And you also can tell him that you have something important to do.Maybe he will get your point.At last,Believe your parents.They all love you forever.All you need to do is communication.Then you will get on well with your parents and brother【高分句型一】.(针对对方的信提出三点建议)
I hope these help!(结尾给出期望)
Tony
 
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