52. 假定你是李华,学生会主席。你校和英国某中学是友好学校。对方学校将举办“中国文化周”,邀请你校派学生参加。

第二节  书面表达(满分25)
52. 假定你是李华,学生会主席。你校和英国某中学是友好学校。对方学校将举办“中国文化周”,邀请你校派学生参加。请你给负责该项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表 示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。内容如下:
1. 活动开始时间;
2. 活动内容;
3. 学生住宿安排。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jason,
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jason,
I'm Li Hua. chairman of the students' union. On behalf of the students, I'd like to express our heartfelt gratitude for inviting us to your school's upcoming Chinese Culture Week. To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.
Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance. Also, I want to ask about the specific activities throughout the week, because the information can help us make better preparations and promote our participation. Lastly, could you please tell us what type of accommodation(s) will be provided? If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.
Thanks again for your kind invitation. It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是应用文,要求写一封书信。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一封电子邮件:假定你是李华,学生会主席。你校和英国某中学是友好学校。对方学校将举办“中国文化周”,邀请你校派学生参加。请你给负责该项目的老师Jason写一封电子邮件表 示感谢邀请并询问相关事宜。内容如下:1. 活动开始时间;2. 活动内容;3. 学生住宿安排。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如; Chinese Culture Week(中国文化周),upcoming(即将来临的),invite(邀请),inquiry(咨询),gratitude(感谢), specific(明确的),promote(提升),participation(参与)及accommodation(住宿)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇有on behalf of(代表),be scheduled to(计划做),apply for (申请),in advance(提前)以及deal with(处理),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“If possible, we hope to stay in the school dormitory, which will offer us more opportunities for cultural exchange with your students.”,宾语从句“Firstly, I'm wondering on what date the event is scheduled to start so that we can apply for visas and book air tickets in advance.”,形式主语“It would be highly appreciated if you could deal with my inquiries at your convenience.”,非谓语动词“To get further information, I’m writing to make some inquiries concerning the event.”,全文没有语法错误,上下句转换自然流畅。
 
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