第三节：书面表达（满分25分）
61. 假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友Bob来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。
提示：
1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人友好。
2、关心同学、乐于助人。
3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。
4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。
5、……（你的建议）。
才能：talent
注意：1.词数130左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Bob,
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions.
First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. In that way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Bob写封信，就如何结交新朋友提出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人友好。
2、关心同学、乐于助人。
3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。
4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。
5、……（你的建议）。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
make new friends; suggestion; try to do sth.; be friendly; care about; be ready to; understand; comfortable; take an active part in; talent; be helpful; happy
第三步：连词成句
1. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school.
2. The following are my suggestions.
3. First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people.
4. You should also care about your schoolmates.
5. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better.
6. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener.
7. In that way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy.
8. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.
9. I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
10.May you be happy in your new school.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First, Second, Finally
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] In that way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
61. 假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友Bob来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。
提示：
1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人友好。
2、关心同学、乐于助人。
3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。
4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。
5、……（你的建议）。
才能：talent
注意：1.词数130左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【答案】Dear Bob,
I’m glad to receive your letter. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school. The following are my suggestions.
First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener. In that way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.
I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy in your new school.
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】Li hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给好友Bob写封信，就如何结交新朋友提出一些建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人友好。
2、关心同学、乐于助人。
3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。
4、积极参加班级活动并展示自己才能。
5、……（你的建议）。
第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）
make new friends; suggestion; try to do sth.; be friendly; care about; be ready to; understand; comfortable; take an active part in; talent; be helpful; happy
第三步：连词成句
1. From your letter, I know you have the problem of how to make new friends in high school.
2. The following are my suggestions.
3. First, you should smile and try to be friendly when you meet people.
4. You should also care about your schoolmates.
5. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better.
6. Second, it is important for you to be a good listener.
7. In that way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy.
8. Finally, it is better for you to take an active part in class activities where you can show your talent.
9. I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
10.May you be happy in your new school.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
表文章结构顺序：First, Second, Finally
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】[高分句型1] If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] In that way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and happy. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
