八、书面表达（本大题共25分）
81.阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
China’s Ministry of Public Security (MPS)（中国公安部） has urged police nationwide to strengthen checks and punishment on the motorists who do not give way to pedestrians.
During the past three years, 3,898 people were killed in 14,000 accidents happened on crosswalks in China, 90 percent of which involved motorists failing to give way to pedestrians, according to the Traffic Management Bureau of the MPS.
Traffic police should step up patrols and strengthen monitoring with surveillance cameras （摄像头）on streets, said the bureau, calling for tougher enforcement and serious punishment.
For a safer environment for pedestrians traffic bureaus(交通局） nationwide will provide better traffic signs, install more traffic lights, and help build more underground passages or pedestrian bridges.
Beijing traffic police on Thursday began enforcing a fine of 200 yuan ($29) for motorists who fail to give way to pedestrians on crosswalks.
The violation will also result in a loss of three demerit points. When motorists loose all 12 points they must retake the driver’s license test.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）分析要“礼让行人”的原因，（至少两点）；
（2）写出你的解决措施。
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【答案】China’s Ministry of Public Security (MPS) has urged police nationwide to strengthen checks and punishment on the motorists who do not give way to pedestrians as this illegal act has taken a lot of lives on crosswalks.
As is known to us, the zebra crossing is the lifeline. However, it becomes the death line because of the dangerous driving. I think MPS’s urge is timely and in line with the interests of the masses. First, compared with cars, people are vulnerable groups in traffic, so ensuring the safety of pedestrians is the first priority. Second, giving way to pedestrians is the embodiment of social civilization. At last, I think giving way to pedestrians depends not only on punishment but also on the voluntary compliance of drivers, because it is the responsibility of every traffic participant to make sure everyone is safe on the road.
I believe that with our joint efforts, our traffic will become safer and safer.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读写任务，要求写一个概要并发表自己的观点。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一个概要并发表自己的观点：用约30个单词写出上文概要；2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：（1）分析要“礼让行人”的原因，（至少两点）；（2）写出你的解决措施。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；give way to (让路)；pedestrians（行人），motorist（机动车驾驶员），punishment（惩罚），zebra crossing（斑马线），illegal（非法的），ensure（保证），safety（安全性），priority（优先考虑的事），embodiment（体现），vulnerable（弱势的）responsibility（责任），voluntary compliance（自愿服从、自觉）及social civilization（社会文明）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有because of（由于），in line with（符合），the interests of the masses (大众的利益)，compare with（与……相比），depend on（依靠）以及make sure（确保），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As is known to us, the zebra crossing is the lifeline.”，宾语从句“I believe that with our joint efforts, our traffic will become safer and safer.”及“I think MPS’s urge is timely and in line with the interests of the masses.”，状语从句“First, compared with cars, people are vulnerable groups in traffic, so ensuring the safety of pedestrians is the first priority.”，非谓语动词“compared with cars, people are vulnerable groups in traffic”及“giving way to pedestrians is the embodiment of social civilization”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
81.阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
China’s Ministry of Public Security (MPS)（中国公安部） has urged police nationwide to strengthen checks and punishment on the motorists who do not give way to pedestrians.
During the past three years, 3,898 people were killed in 14,000 accidents happened on crosswalks in China, 90 percent of which involved motorists failing to give way to pedestrians, according to the Traffic Management Bureau of the MPS.
Traffic police should step up patrols and strengthen monitoring with surveillance cameras （摄像头）on streets, said the bureau, calling for tougher enforcement and serious punishment.
For a safer environment for pedestrians traffic bureaus(交通局） nationwide will provide better traffic signs, install more traffic lights, and help build more underground passages or pedestrian bridges.
Beijing traffic police on Thursday began enforcing a fine of 200 yuan ($29) for motorists who fail to give way to pedestrians on crosswalks.
The violation will also result in a loss of three demerit points. When motorists loose all 12 points they must retake the driver’s license test.
【写作内容】
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）分析要“礼让行人”的原因，（至少两点）；
（2）写出你的解决措施。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】China’s Ministry of Public Security (MPS) has urged police nationwide to strengthen checks and punishment on the motorists who do not give way to pedestrians as this illegal act has taken a lot of lives on crosswalks.
As is known to us, the zebra crossing is the lifeline. However, it becomes the death line because of the dangerous driving. I think MPS’s urge is timely and in line with the interests of the masses. First, compared with cars, people are vulnerable groups in traffic, so ensuring the safety of pedestrians is the first priority. Second, giving way to pedestrians is the embodiment of social civilization. At last, I think giving way to pedestrians depends not only on punishment but also on the voluntary compliance of drivers, because it is the responsibility of every traffic participant to make sure everyone is safe on the road.
I believe that with our joint efforts, our traffic will become safer and safer.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读写任务，要求写一个概要并发表自己的观点。
【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一个概要并发表自己的观点：用约30个单词写出上文概要；2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：（1）分析要“礼让行人”的原因，（至少两点）；（2）写出你的解决措施。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如；give way to (让路)；pedestrians（行人），motorist（机动车驾驶员），punishment（惩罚），zebra crossing（斑马线），illegal（非法的），ensure（保证），safety（安全性），priority（优先考虑的事），embodiment（体现），vulnerable（弱势的）responsibility（责任），voluntary compliance（自愿服从、自觉）及social civilization（社会文明）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。
本文内容完整，层次分明，结构紧凑，表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有because of（由于），in line with（符合），the interests of the masses (大众的利益)，compare with（与……相比），depend on（依靠）以及make sure（确保），而且还使用了非限定性定语从句“As is known to us, the zebra crossing is the lifeline.”，宾语从句“I believe that with our joint efforts, our traffic will become safer and safer.”及“I think MPS’s urge is timely and in line with the interests of the masses.”，状语从句“First, compared with cars, people are vulnerable groups in traffic, so ensuring the safety of pedestrians is the first priority.”，非谓语动词“compared with cars, people are vulnerable groups in traffic”及“giving way to pedestrians is the embodiment of social civilization”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。
