86.请阅读下面短文,并按要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。 Young Chinese parents embracing e-books for children

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86.请阅读下面短文,并按要求用英语写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。
Young Chinese parents embracing e-books for children
Chinese children are spending more time reading digital books as young parents are increasingly open to the idea, research shows.
The amount of time children under 9 spend reading e-books every day increased almost 20 percent to 24. 3 minutes between 2016 and 2017, according to a joint study by e-book company Kada Story and teaching consultancy TAL Education Group.
A three-year study of 6, 030 parents found that almost 70 percent said they are willing to let their children use mobile phones and tablets, while 25 percent of those born in the 1990s or later said they let their children spend more than 40 minutes a day on mobile devices.
Parents in first-tier cities are more likely to let their children use mobile devices, with children in Beijing spending almost 70 minutes a day using the gadgets.
“Digital reading is an important skill for children to master in this age of information explosion, ” said Wang Jing, chief editor of Kada Story.
However, not all parents want their children to read digitally.
“I fear e-books will negatively affect my son’s attention span or expose him to inappropriate content, ” said Xie Wenfeng, mother of a 7-year-old boy in Shanghai.
She said she believed books in print are better for the eyes and do not affect sleep. “I also worry about possible addiction to e-books.” she added.
 
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词写出上文概要;
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点,内容包括:
(1)支持或反对家长让孩子读电子书籍;
(2)并用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。
【写作要求】
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【答案】支持:
With more parents willing to let their children use mobile devices, the amount of time children spend reading e-books every day is increasing steadily. However, parents’ opinions vary on it.
Personally, I’m in favor of it. Compared to books in print, e-books have more advantages. E-books can be accessed remotely and can therefore make a single purchase available in almost every place. Besides, e-books are much cheaper than books in print, and they can provide the same knowledge for our children. Furthermore, considering the environment and these new technologies that do not call for trees to be sacrificed for a good story, perhaps e-books are a good thing. Last but not least, children should be equipped with the basic ability of digital reading in this age of information explosion.
Therefore, it’s safe to conclude that parents can help encourage children to read e-books. In the meantime, they may limit children’s screen time.
反对:
With more parents willing to let their children use mobile devices, the amount of time children spend reading e-books every day is increasing steadily. However, parents’ opinions vary on it.
Personally, I’m strongly against it. Though e-books have appeared for many years and the market is growing rapidly, books in print still occupy the first place. When compared with e-books, books in print have their natural advantages. Firstly, traditional reading helps children cultivate abstract thinking ability. By contrast, e-books look like a kind of fast food culture which lacks depth. Secondly, books in print can be kept for a long time if well taken care of. Thirdly, there being no need to scroll or click, children don’t suffer from screen glare while reading on the iPad is bad for our eyes.
To conclude, nothing compares to the feel and smell of books in print. Letting children read them is a right choice.
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读写任务,要求概述一篇说明文并发表自己的看法。
【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求概述一篇说明文并发表自己的看法:1. 请用30个单词概述上文主要内容。2. 请用120个词写出: (1) 支持或反对家长让孩子读电子书籍;
(2)用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定是支持还是反对家长让孩子读电子书籍,注意只用写一种观点。根据自己的观点以及写作要求确定关键词(组)。例如如果你支持家长让孩子读电子书籍,关键词可以有in favor of(支持),have advantages(有优势),be much cheaper than(比便宜得多),the age of information(信息时代)等。如果你反对家长让孩子读电子书籍,关键词可以是be strongly against it(强烈反对),traditional reading(传统阅读),lack depth(缺乏深度)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持卷面的整洁美观。
【点睛】两篇范文都是语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。
两篇范文中使用了一些高级词汇,比如 compare… to(把…..和….作比较),provide…for…(给…..提供……),be equipped with(配备有),occupy(占据),by contrast (相反的是),suffer from(遭受……)等。
范文中使用了较多高级句式。比如非谓语的应用:Compared to books in print, e-books have more advantages. E-books can be accessed remotely;定语从句的应用By contrast, e-books look like a kind of fast food culture which lacks depth./ …considering the environment and these new technologies that do not call for trees to be sacrificed for a good story,;it 做形式主语it’s safe to conclude that parents can help encourage children to read e-books.。
范文上下句转换自然流畅。考生可以通过仿写来提高自己的写作水平。
 
 
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