5．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty and while my friends were on night duty. On one shift, I remember I sensed something just before going off duty at 11am. I had brought the ward sister her morning tea, so I put down the tea tray. The tray rattled and fell through the window. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shook and patients screamed.
I realized that we were in the grips of a tremendous earthquake. I caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened by it. I pushed her under the bed and held the bed in place while I got under it myself. I then pulled a blanket down between us. As soon as it settled, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside, I carried her out and helped her down to the lawn, where several other people now had gathered.
I knew the ward sister was with another patient, so I went back inside the building. When I reached the ward sister, I found her patient couldn’t walk. We made a seat for her by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind. Almost all of the patients had been able to get themselves out of our ward, as far as I knew.
Once our ward was cleared, a doctor called for volunteers to go down to the isolation ward with him to help more people. Another nurse and I went down there. The first thing we saw was a bath in the hallway, We came to the ruined ward. The doctor went in ahead of us through the remains of what had been a doorway. He found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble (碎石). She was still alive so we began to clear the rubble away. Suddenly the aftershock struck. The doctor ordered us to leave. This brave man intended to stay with the trapped nurse and risk his own life.
注意：1. 所叙写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 叙写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 叙写完成后，用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
We were determined to save the nurse with him together.
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Later in the afternoon I had time to look around, and saw the ruined building.
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【答案】Possible version one:
We were determined to save the nurse with him together. We were faced with falling rubble from time to time, but not as much as before. We were as stubborn as ever, following the doctor. The trapped nurse was still alive. We focused our efforts on freeing from the ruins. Once she was free, the doctor guided us through the remains safely. He kept a perfectly calm tone throughout, which helped soothe me.my heart leaped with joy as we successfully walked out of the building. All of the survivors’ gratitude was profound, passionate and boundless.
Later in the afternoon I had time to look around, and saw the ruined building .I felt like I was floating in an ocean of sadness. In my mind’s eye I saw the original building that I worked in, so massive and beautiful, and the memories filled me with unbearable sadness. The doctor stood beside me and said with a faint smile, “We should be happy for those who survive the earthquake.” I managed to smile back as the wind danced around us, and I felt lucky to be alive. (160 words)
Possible version two:
We were determined to save the nurse with him together. Fortunately, the aftershock wasn’t strong. Once it had passed, we focused our efforts on freeing the nurse. We removed the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. A sharp stone cut my hand. The sharp pain made to want to cry, but I managed to hold back. Because in this horrible earthquake, what we could do was only struggling to grasp a chance of surviving for her. It seemed like an eternity before we freed her from the rubble. We carried her outside to the lawn.
Later in the afternoon I had time to look around, and saw the ruined building. My beautiful workplace now lay beyond recognition (lay in ruins) The only thing that remained was broken walls amidst the dim dust. I felt a weight on my chest as the sadness swelled inside. My musings were interrupted by the noise around me. The rescue team was working against the clock to get people out of the rubble alive. The patients were evacuated in an orderly manner. Looking up at the sky, I saw the sun’s dazzling light was shining down on the remain and sprinkling the streets.(175words)
【分析】
本文以地震为线索展开，讲述了作者和医生一起在地震中勇敢救人的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们决心和他一起去救那个护士。”可知，第一段可描写作者和那个医生一起拯救那个护士的过程，和结果。
②由第二段首句内容“下午晚些时候，我有时间四处看看，看到了那座废墟。”可知，第二段可描写作者震后看到废墟，伤感和庆幸。
2.续写线索：移开瓦砾——施救离开——震后观察——伤感——庆幸
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 移开瓦砾：remove the rubble /carry the broken stones and bricks away
② 施救：freeing from the ruins /rescue the nurse/ keep the nurse safe
情绪类
①.伤感：an ocean of sadness /feel sad and upset
②.庆幸：feel lucky to be alive /be thankful to survive
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He kept a perfectly calm tone throughout, which helped soothe me my heart leaped with joy as we successfully walked out of the building.(which引导的非限制性定语定语从句)
[高分句型2]. In my mind’s eye I saw the original building that I worked in, so massive and beautiful, and the memories filled me with unbearable sadness.(that引导的限制性定语从句)
When I worked as a nurse, I was on day duty and while my friends were on night duty. On one shift, I remember I sensed something just before going off duty at 11am. I had brought the ward sister her morning tea, so I put down the tea tray. The tray rattled and fell through the window. At first I thought I had accidentally knocked it over, but then I felt the whole building shook and patients screamed.
I realized that we were in the grips of a tremendous earthquake. I caught hold of a nearby patient, who was terribly frightened by it. I pushed her under the bed and held the bed in place while I got under it myself. I then pulled a blanket down between us. As soon as it settled, I decided to try and get the patient safely outside, I carried her out and helped her down to the lawn, where several other people now had gathered.
I knew the ward sister was with another patient, so I went back inside the building. When I reached the ward sister, I found her patient couldn’t walk. We made a seat for her by linking our hands and arms, and carried her outside together. We went back through the building to check no one was left behind. Almost all of the patients had been able to get themselves out of our ward, as far as I knew.
Once our ward was cleared, a doctor called for volunteers to go down to the isolation ward with him to help more people. Another nurse and I went down there. The first thing we saw was a bath in the hallway, We came to the ruined ward. The doctor went in ahead of us through the remains of what had been a doorway. He found one of the nurses partially covered with rubble (碎石). She was still alive so we began to clear the rubble away. Suddenly the aftershock struck. The doctor ordered us to leave. This brave man intended to stay with the trapped nurse and risk his own life.
注意：1. 所叙写的短文词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 叙写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 叙写完成后，用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
We were determined to save the nurse with him together.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Later in the afternoon I had time to look around, and saw the ruined building.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Possible version one:
We were determined to save the nurse with him together. We were faced with falling rubble from time to time, but not as much as before. We were as stubborn as ever, following the doctor. The trapped nurse was still alive. We focused our efforts on freeing from the ruins. Once she was free, the doctor guided us through the remains safely. He kept a perfectly calm tone throughout, which helped soothe me.my heart leaped with joy as we successfully walked out of the building. All of the survivors’ gratitude was profound, passionate and boundless.
Later in the afternoon I had time to look around, and saw the ruined building .I felt like I was floating in an ocean of sadness. In my mind’s eye I saw the original building that I worked in, so massive and beautiful, and the memories filled me with unbearable sadness. The doctor stood beside me and said with a faint smile, “We should be happy for those who survive the earthquake.” I managed to smile back as the wind danced around us, and I felt lucky to be alive. (160 words)
Possible version two:
We were determined to save the nurse with him together. Fortunately, the aftershock wasn’t strong. Once it had passed, we focused our efforts on freeing the nurse. We removed the bricks and the rubble that trapped her body. A sharp stone cut my hand. The sharp pain made to want to cry, but I managed to hold back. Because in this horrible earthquake, what we could do was only struggling to grasp a chance of surviving for her. It seemed like an eternity before we freed her from the rubble. We carried her outside to the lawn.
Later in the afternoon I had time to look around, and saw the ruined building. My beautiful workplace now lay beyond recognition (lay in ruins) The only thing that remained was broken walls amidst the dim dust. I felt a weight on my chest as the sadness swelled inside. My musings were interrupted by the noise around me. The rescue team was working against the clock to get people out of the rubble alive. The patients were evacuated in an orderly manner. Looking up at the sky, I saw the sun’s dazzling light was shining down on the remain and sprinkling the streets.(175words)
【分析】
本文以地震为线索展开，讲述了作者和医生一起在地震中勇敢救人的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们决心和他一起去救那个护士。”可知，第一段可描写作者和那个医生一起拯救那个护士的过程，和结果。
②由第二段首句内容“下午晚些时候，我有时间四处看看，看到了那座废墟。”可知，第二段可描写作者震后看到废墟，伤感和庆幸。
2.续写线索：移开瓦砾——施救离开——震后观察——伤感——庆幸
3.词汇激活
行为类
① 移开瓦砾：remove the rubble /carry the broken stones and bricks away
② 施救：freeing from the ruins /rescue the nurse/ keep the nurse safe
情绪类
①.伤感：an ocean of sadness /feel sad and upset
②.庆幸：feel lucky to be alive /be thankful to survive
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He kept a perfectly calm tone throughout, which helped soothe me my heart leaped with joy as we successfully walked out of the building.(which引导的非限制性定语定语从句)
[高分句型2]. In my mind’s eye I saw the original building that I worked in, so massive and beautiful, and the memories filled me with unbearable sadness.(that引导的限制性定语从句)
