2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
After dinner, Mrs. Quimby told the family that Grandma, who lived on a farm, had sent in a lot of pumpkins for jack-o’-lanterns (空心南瓜灯) for the neighborhood children. There was one in the basement waiting to be carved, she added. Ramona sprang to her feet and dashed down to bring it up, but it was too heavy for a second-grader. Finally Mr. Quimby gave a hand.
“Let’s make it smile like last year,” exclaimed Ramona.
“Hmm. Let’s see.” Mr. Quimby studied the pumpkin, turning it to find the best side for the face. With a pencil he sketched (素描) a nose-shaped nose, not a triangle. Then the mouth turned up on both sides. “smiling!” Ramona clapped her hands.
Mr. Quimby nodded with a smile, cut a circle around the top of the pumpkin and lifted it off for a lid. Without being asked, Ramona found a big spoon for scooping out the seeds. Picky-picky, the Quimbys' shabby old cat, came into the kitchen to see if something had been put in his dish. When he found that it had not, he paused, sniffed the pumpkin smell and angrily walked out with his tail twitching.
Mr. Quimby began to whistle as he carved with skill and care, first a mouthful of teeth, each one neat and square, then eyes and eyebrows. He was working on two ears shaped like question marks when Mrs. Quimby announced it was bedtime for Ramona. Unwillingly Ramona ran, took a shower and quickly returned. Now, Mr. Quimby had just carved a few C-shaped curls (卷发) around the hole in the top of the pumpkin. He reached inside and dug a candle holder in the bottom.
“There,” he said, putting down his knife. “A work of art.” Mrs. Quimby found a candle stub (残根), inserted it in the pumpkin, lit it and set the lid in place. Ramona turned off the light. The jack-o’-lantern was smiling with a flickering flame. “Wow!” Ramona threw her arms around her father before going to bed with great satisfaction.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
In the middle of the night Ramona awoke to a noise.
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Paragraph 2:
On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face.
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【答案】In the middle of the night, Ramona awoke to a noise. Ramona turned on the light and jumped out of bed angrily. It turned out that the cat accidentally bumped the jack-o’-lantern to the floor while catching mice. It was broken. Looking at her beloved jack-o-lantern lying on the floor, the candle in it went out, Ramona began to cry. Mr. Quimby was also woken up, got up to comfort Ramona and helped her take the jack-o’-lantern to the table.
On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face. Ramona continued to cry, and dad decided to carve the pumpkin again. He picked up the knife and carved along the incomplete face of the pumpkin. The incomplete face became funnier, and the lantern laughed more brightly. Dad said, “Ramona, don't cry. Look at your pumpkin lantern. It’s alive again.” Ramona dried her tears and smiled with greater satisfaction.
【分析】
本文以南瓜灯为线索展开，讲述了住在农场的奶奶送来南瓜可以做南瓜灯，爸爸Mr. Quimby帮助女儿，精心雕刻南瓜灯，女儿Ramona非常满意。结果晚上半夜南瓜灯被猫撞到地板上，Ramona非常伤心。爸爸重塑南瓜灯，让女儿重新欢乐起来的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“半夜里，Ramona被一声吵醒了。”可知，第一段可描写猫把南瓜灯撞到地上，南瓜灯坏了，Ramona很伤心。
②由第二段首句内容“在桌子上，他们的南瓜灯不再是一张完整的脸了。”可知，第二段可描写爸爸重塑南瓜灯，Ramona重新欢乐起来。
2.续写线索：摔坏——伤心——重塑——欢乐
3.词汇激活
行为类
①摔坏： bump sth to the floor broken/ fall/drop to the ground and become damaged
②重塑：remodel /carve again
情绪类
①伤心：sad /upset/heart-broken
②欢乐：be happy/feel pleased/ with greater satisfaction
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. It turned out that the cat accidentally bumped the jack-o’-lantern to the floor while catching mice. (that引导的名词性从句、while引导的时间状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2]. Looking at her beloved jack-o-lantern lying on the floor, the candle in it went out, Ramona began to cry. (现在分词作状语)
After dinner, Mrs. Quimby told the family that Grandma, who lived on a farm, had sent in a lot of pumpkins for jack-o’-lanterns (空心南瓜灯) for the neighborhood children. There was one in the basement waiting to be carved, she added. Ramona sprang to her feet and dashed down to bring it up, but it was too heavy for a second-grader. Finally Mr. Quimby gave a hand.
“Let’s make it smile like last year,” exclaimed Ramona.
“Hmm. Let’s see.” Mr. Quimby studied the pumpkin, turning it to find the best side for the face. With a pencil he sketched (素描) a nose-shaped nose, not a triangle. Then the mouth turned up on both sides. “smiling!” Ramona clapped her hands.
Mr. Quimby nodded with a smile, cut a circle around the top of the pumpkin and lifted it off for a lid. Without being asked, Ramona found a big spoon for scooping out the seeds. Picky-picky, the Quimbys' shabby old cat, came into the kitchen to see if something had been put in his dish. When he found that it had not, he paused, sniffed the pumpkin smell and angrily walked out with his tail twitching.
Mr. Quimby began to whistle as he carved with skill and care, first a mouthful of teeth, each one neat and square, then eyes and eyebrows. He was working on two ears shaped like question marks when Mrs. Quimby announced it was bedtime for Ramona. Unwillingly Ramona ran, took a shower and quickly returned. Now, Mr. Quimby had just carved a few C-shaped curls (卷发) around the hole in the top of the pumpkin. He reached inside and dug a candle holder in the bottom.
“There,” he said, putting down his knife. “A work of art.” Mrs. Quimby found a candle stub (残根), inserted it in the pumpkin, lit it and set the lid in place. Ramona turned off the light. The jack-o’-lantern was smiling with a flickering flame. “Wow!” Ramona threw her arms around her father before going to bed with great satisfaction.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
In the middle of the night Ramona awoke to a noise.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】In the middle of the night, Ramona awoke to a noise. Ramona turned on the light and jumped out of bed angrily. It turned out that the cat accidentally bumped the jack-o’-lantern to the floor while catching mice. It was broken. Looking at her beloved jack-o-lantern lying on the floor, the candle in it went out, Ramona began to cry. Mr. Quimby was also woken up, got up to comfort Ramona and helped her take the jack-o’-lantern to the table.
On the table their jack-o’-lantern no longer had a whole face. Ramona continued to cry, and dad decided to carve the pumpkin again. He picked up the knife and carved along the incomplete face of the pumpkin. The incomplete face became funnier, and the lantern laughed more brightly. Dad said, “Ramona, don't cry. Look at your pumpkin lantern. It’s alive again.” Ramona dried her tears and smiled with greater satisfaction.
【分析】
本文以南瓜灯为线索展开，讲述了住在农场的奶奶送来南瓜可以做南瓜灯，爸爸Mr. Quimby帮助女儿，精心雕刻南瓜灯，女儿Ramona非常满意。结果晚上半夜南瓜灯被猫撞到地板上，Ramona非常伤心。爸爸重塑南瓜灯，让女儿重新欢乐起来的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“半夜里，Ramona被一声吵醒了。”可知，第一段可描写猫把南瓜灯撞到地上，南瓜灯坏了，Ramona很伤心。
②由第二段首句内容“在桌子上，他们的南瓜灯不再是一张完整的脸了。”可知，第二段可描写爸爸重塑南瓜灯，Ramona重新欢乐起来。
2.续写线索：摔坏——伤心——重塑——欢乐
3.词汇激活
行为类
①摔坏： bump sth to the floor broken/ fall/drop to the ground and become damaged
②重塑：remodel /carve again
情绪类
①伤心：sad /upset/heart-broken
②欢乐：be happy/feel pleased/ with greater satisfaction
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. It turned out that the cat accidentally bumped the jack-o’-lantern to the floor while catching mice. (that引导的名词性从句、while引导的时间状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2]. Looking at her beloved jack-o-lantern lying on the floor, the candle in it went out, Ramona began to cry. (现在分词作状语)
