Theo stood at the microphone. Silence settled over the hall. "Your word is onomatopoeia,"

5.阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Theo stood at the microphone. Silence settled over the hall. "Your word is onomatopoeia," said Mr Ramirez, the announcer. I got this! Theo thought. Spelling was sort of his superpower. He wasn't a math or science guy, but he had a gift for spelling.
Theo's brain fast-forwarded to the spelling bees ahead: first the county championship, then the state championship, and finally the national spelling bee. "Your answer, please, Theo?" He glanced back at Alexa, another fourth-grader, sitting on the edge of her chair. She wanted another chance at winning. If he missed his word, she'd be back in the game. But that wasn't going to happen. Theo got the right spelling.
Theo's sister, Deandra, who had also competed but missed her word, applauded with the rest of the crowd. Mr. Ramirez presented the trophy(奖杯)to Theo. He lifted both arms into the air. "I'm the alpha-best." Then he raced toward his sister. "Ha!" Theo said, making the trophy dance in front of Deandra's nose.
She rolled her eyes. "You're a terrible winner."
"What's wrong with celebrating my victory?"
Deandra crossed her arms and made a sour face. "You know, it wasn't cool the way you ignored Alexa onstage. She tried to shake your hand."
Theo shrugged. "I didn't notice. Anyway, county bee, here I come!"
"You might want to crack open the dictionary before counties. In two weeks, you'll be facing the best of the best."
"And they'll be up against me,the alpha-beast."
Deandra shook her head. "Well, good luck. I think you're going to need it."
Two weeks passed in a blink. At the county bee, students from different schools gathered around onstage, some looking more worried than others. Finally, it was time for the contestants(选手)to take their seats.
After six rounds, the group of more than 100 students decreased to just seven. This was no regular spelling bee. Theo had barely made it through the last round with a lucky guess on conscience. And if he'd had to spell aerospace or conical, he'd be out already. His sister's advice suddenly made sense.
注意:
1.所续写的短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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When it was his turn again, Theo stood frozen for the longest moment.
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The following Monday at school, Theo found Alexa in the lunchroom. 
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【答案】        When it was his turn again, Theo stood frozen for the longest moment. The silence hurt his ears. He wiped his sweaty palms on his pants. It seemed that his superpower disappeared at that moment. Theo couldn’t spell every following word. He remembered the school spelling bee and Alexa just missing the win. He hadn’t even made it as far in his bee as she had in that one. He had to admit that Deandra was right. He was absolutely a terrible winner, and now, a terrible loser.
The following Monday at school, Theo found Alexa in the lunchroom. “Do you mind if I sit down?” he asked in a weak voice. Alexa slid her books aside to make room. Theo gathered up his courage and apologized for his rudeness after he won the school bee. “It’s ok. How was the country bee?” Alexa asked. “What a disaster.” Then shrugged his shoulders. “Would you like to be my study partner for next time?” “Why not” Alexa’s smile seemed to wipe off Theo’s frustration and he was really expecting to be the next Alpha-best.
【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知,拼写天才Theo在比赛中赢得了姐姐Deandra和对手Alexa,但是Theo太过于骄傲,忽略了对手的握手和姐姐的建议,在Theo即将参加下一场比赛的时候,临场发挥侥幸进入决赛,可是到比赛最后的时候,Theo意识到姐姐的建议是对的。
【详解】
续写部分分为2段,第一段的开头是当再次轮到他时,他呆呆地站了很长时间……, 所以这里写Theo进入决赛之后答题的场景,Theo太过于紧张,感觉超能力消失了,不会拼写单词了,这时很后悔没听姐姐的建议,觉得自己很失败。
第二段开头是在接下来的一个周一,Theo在学校餐厅里找到了Alex……, 所以这里要描写Theo参加完比赛后对同学Alex的表现。Theo对于之前比赛中的粗鲁行为对Alex表示抱歉,希望能够和Alex成为学习上的伙伴,Alex也乐意和Theo一起学习。为此消除了Theo的沮丧。
【高分句型1】
Almost every word that followed was one Theo couldn’t spell. 接下来的几乎每个词Theo都不会拼写。运用了2个定语从句,第一句是that引导的定语从句,第二句省略关系词that。
【高分句型2】
He had to admit what Deandra said was right. 他不得不承认Deandra所说的的话是正确的。运用了what引导的宾语从句。
 
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