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4．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It’s a perfect family summer seaside holiday. Occasionally some white clouds floated across the blue sky. The sandy beach was soft and comfortable. The water was glistering in the morning sunlight and the surf was cool on their feet as Krin and Paula leisurely walked along the water edge. The brother and sister began to make some sandcastles. Not far away, mother sat under a big umbrella, reading a book with a bottle of lemonade in her hand. Father was busy exchanging a few words of greetings with the strangers he met on the beach.

Suddenly, Krin spotted some pieces of seashells lying scattered on the picturesque beach and small holes stretching along it where the crabs had hidden. He immediately invited Paula to collect shells and search the holes together with him. They were having a ball exploring what appeared to be a never-ending beach.
After a while, they stopped and looked back. Their parents and the umbrellas, beach chairs, and crowds were a long way off. But just ahead, hidden amongst sea grape trees stood a run-down house that seemed to be out of repair for years. It appeared to be unoccupied. Curious, they went to investigate.
The front steps to the doorway of the house creaked (嘎吱作响) as they carefully climbed up them, so did the porch when they stepped onto it. The dusty windows and porch railing (门廊 栏杆) were badly weathered and broken. The front door was half open so they squeezed through and cautiously entered. The place was in a total mess, covered with dust, sand, dead leaves, and overturned furniture. They’d taken but a few steps when the door unexpectedly slammed shut behind them.
Scared, Krin and Paula were frozen to the spot. But before they could even utter something like “Oh-oh,” the windows abruptly closed, too. And if this wasn’t scary enough, the stairs to the second floor creaked loudly. When a light in the back bedroom flickered (摇曳), that was absolutely the final straw.
注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
“Let’s get out of here, Paula!” screamed Krin. __________________________________________________
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Paragraph 2:
Out they ran, all the way back to those wonderful umbrellas, beach chairs, and crowds. _________________
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
“Let’s get out of here, Paula!” screamed Krin. But it seemed that Paula didn't hear anything, and much to his horror, Krin spotted his sister standing there, with her frightened eyes staring at the swinging light and the creaking stairs. For a moment, a desperate and terrible silence spread through the house. Krin almost felt his blood frozen in his chest as he saw what was happening around. After seemingly a long time, his mind began to race again, trying to think how they could break down the closed door and escape. Immediately, he grabbed hold of his sister's hand, dashed to the front door, and in the meanwhile let out a cry, "Come on, Paula...." But bad luck for poor Krin, he tripped and fell before they got out of the haunted house.
Paragraph 2:
Out ran they  , all the way back to those wonderful umbrellas, beach chairs, and crowds. "Did you see what it was?" Paula said to Krin. “whatever it is, I don't want to go back.” Krin said. Then they calmed down for a while, went back to their parents, and told them about their experience. But the parents just blamed them for their running around without permission and didn't believe what they said. But in any case, they came to the conclusion that children should not wander into old run-down houses.
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写作文。
【详解】
通过阅读所给文章可知，兄妹俩 Krin and Paula 与父母在海滩上愉快地度假，在海葡萄树丛中，兄妹俩发现一幢年久失修的房子。出于好奇心，他们决定进去一探究竟，他们进入了房子发现里面非常杂乱，到处是灰尘、枯叶和翻倒的家具，他们还没走几步，身后的房门就突然砰地一声关上，窗户也突然关上，兄妹俩吓得呆住了。而更令他们恐惧的是通往二楼的楼梯嘎吱声大作，并且从后面卧室里透出摇曳的光亮。
续写部分分为两段，第一段段首句： Krin 尖叫道：“让我们跑出去！”原文已交代前门和窗户都案然关上了，而更令他们恐惧的是通往二楼的楼梯嘎吱声大作，从后面卧室里透出摇曳的光亮。所以第一段的情节最好由此展开，续写兄妹俩是如何在极度恐惧的心情下逃出房子的，尤其关注他们面对恐惧时的心理和动作描写。第二段段首句： Krin 和 Paula 已经逃出了房子，通过段首句 “wonderful” 一词可知他们已安全回到了沙滩上父母的身边。那么，他们会交流些什么？父母有何回应？他们从这次经历中有何感悟？
续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】
[高分句型一]
As soon as he recovered from his fear, he grabbed Paula's hand and ran out of the house.（他一从恐惧中恢复过来，就抓住宝拉的手跑出了房子。）运用了as soon as引导时间状语从句。
[高分句型二]
Adults always ignore children's feelings, even though sometimes they are telling the truth.（成年人总是忽视孩子的感受，即使有时候他们说的是实话。）运用了even though引导让步状语从句。