2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.
One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when he saw the price, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls.
Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, that's okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”
A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her? She's my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, that's okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Several days later, when Jenny's father came in to read her a story, Jenny
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Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.
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【答案】Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent- minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, with her fingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered to her father, softly and gently, “ Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.” Then, the necklace slid into her father’s hands determinedly.
Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, his father dragged out a blue box. Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there, a thrilled expression twisting her face. Before Jenney was able to say something, her father brushed a warm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms. Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.
【分析】
本文为续写作文。续写就是围绕文章中心，联系生活并运用想象，给课文补充一个适当的段落。续写文章时要注意，一是根据所提供的文章开头、结尾或其他线索，明确续写的方向和路子。二是续写时，情节的发展要合乎逻辑，人物的思想要前后一致，叙述的语气上也要一致。
【详解】
本文为读故事，续写作文。根据提供的文章开头，续写成文。首先要认真读懂给作提供的材料，弄清整篇文章的中心是什么。然后根据中心，补续事情的发展和故事的结局。人物和事物要与原文保持连续性和一致性，融为一体。续写的文章要有明确的中心，重点突出 ，有详有略。故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。要注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。2.要注意应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【点睛】
文章续写部分与所给短文的开头语衔接程度较紧。所续写内容的非常丰富和能根据语境恰当运用要求使用的5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性应用方面，续写时的语法结构较为复杂。运用了多种复句，如多处运用了状语从句when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed.名词从句：No one knew what the necklace meant to her.定语从句…Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there,…文中多次运用了非谓语，如非谓语作状语When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent- minded,…，Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered和Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision。With的复合结构中非谓语作宾补：with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. with her fingers trembling automatically
此外补续事情的发展和故事的结局合理，人物和事物也与原文保持连续性和一致性，文章的上下文的内容连贯，融为一体。
Jenny was a pretty eight-year-old girl.
One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace, by which she was totally defeated. How eagerly she wanted it! But when he saw the price, her heart sank a little. She gathered up her courage and asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I can buy you the necklace, but when we get home we should make up a list of housework that you can do to pay for the necklace.” Jenny agreed immediately, feeling a burst of joy. So her mother bought the pearl necklace for her. Jenny worked on her housework determinedly and earnestly every day. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls.
Jenny had a very loving daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story. One night when he finished the story, he said, “Jenny, do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said delightedly, with a broad smile on her face. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” Hearing that, Jenny froze there, an anxious expression twisting her face. “Oh! Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay?” “Oh no, darling, that's okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss, gently and calmly. “Good night, little one.”
A week later, her father once again asked Jenny after her story, “Do you love me?” “Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you.” the little girl murmured softly, trying to escape from her father’s eyes. “Well, then, give me your pearls.” “Oh, Daddy, not my pearls! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her? She's my favorite.” The little girl begged. “No, that's okay,” her father said, smiling broadly and sweetly and brushed her cheek again with a kiss. “God bless you, little one. Sweet dreams.”
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:
Several days later, when Jenny's father came in to read her a story, Jenny
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph2:
Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, the father dragged out a blue box.
____________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Several days later, when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed. When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent- minded, with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. When the story came to an end, unexpectedly, Jenny offered her beloved necklace to her father, with her fingers trembling automatically. No one knew what the necklace meant to her. She whispered to her father, softly and gently, “ Daddy, you know I love you more than the necklace.” Then, the necklace slid into her father’s hands determinedly.
Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered, his father dragged out a blue box. Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there, a thrilled expression twisting her face. Before Jenney was able to say something, her father brushed a warm kiss on her face and gathered her into his arms. Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision.
【分析】
本文为续写作文。续写就是围绕文章中心，联系生活并运用想象，给课文补充一个适当的段落。续写文章时要注意，一是根据所提供的文章开头、结尾或其他线索，明确续写的方向和路子。二是续写时，情节的发展要合乎逻辑，人物的思想要前后一致，叙述的语气上也要一致。
【详解】
本文为读故事，续写作文。根据提供的文章开头，续写成文。首先要认真读懂给作提供的材料，弄清整篇文章的中心是什么。然后根据中心，补续事情的发展和故事的结局。人物和事物要与原文保持连续性和一致性，融为一体。续写的文章要有明确的中心，重点突出 ，有详有略。故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。要注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右。2.要注意应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【点睛】
文章续写部分与所给短文的开头语衔接程度较紧。所续写内容的非常丰富和能根据语境恰当运用要求使用的5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语。
语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性应用方面，续写时的语法结构较为复杂。运用了多种复句，如多处运用了状语从句when Jenny’s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was waiting anxiously for him on the bed.名词从句：No one knew what the necklace meant to her.定语从句…Much to Jenny’s amazement, a beautiful real pearl necklace lay peacefully in the box, which set her heart racing. Jenny froze there,…文中多次运用了非谓语，如非谓语作状语When listening to the story, Jenny was totally absent- minded,…，Holding the plastic pearl his daughter offered和Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, tears beginning to blur her vision。With的复合结构中非谓语作宾补：with her hands holding the necklace tightly and firmly. with her fingers trembling automatically
此外补续事情的发展和故事的结局合理，人物和事物也与原文保持连续性和一致性，文章的上下文的内容连贯，融为一体。
