In 1989, fresh out of high school, I was faced with a difficult choice of a career path before colle

6.阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为120左右。
In 1989, fresh out of high school, I was faced with a difficult choice of a career path before college started in three months. In those days in Pakistan(巴基斯坦),there were limited choices: becoming a doctor or an engineer, or entering the financial world after getting a business degree. I wasn't interested in engineering, so that I was left with medicine or business. I couldn't decide.
My uncle suggested that I do a work placement(实习工作)to experience it for a month in an international company followed by a month in a hospital. After that, I could make a decision. It seemed like a good idea.
I was accepted for a month's placement at a foreign bank in Karachi. I got a feel for how the world of finance worked, made new friends, and generally enjoyed the mostly easy-going work environment.
The month passed rapidly, and soon I began working at a leading hospital in Karachi. The experience was quite different. The hospital days started early(at 7 am, compared with 9 am at the bank), and were filled with endless duties. And the night calls! This was crazy, working all day, through the night, and again in the next day.
I began thinking about my two experiences. The bank had offered a more relaxing atmosphere, better working hours and less stress. The hospital had an intense(严肃紧张的)environment, and the studying and training was difficult. It seemed that business was a better choice.
Near the end of my month at the hospital, I was driving home after a very busy night call. In front of me was a public bus, with some boys sitting on the top. As the driver weaved through(穿梭)traffic, I could see the boys shaking from side to side.
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Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus. 
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The next day, when I went to hospital to see the boy, all his family got up, with grateful smiles on their faces. 
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【答案】Suddenly, a boy fell off the back of the bus. He fell so heavily, lying motionless in the middle of the road. The bus driver wasn’t aware of what was happening and sped away. Driven by a sense of duty, I stopped my car immediately and examined him carefully. With the help of some passers-by, I lifted him into my car and sent him to the hospital. Fortunately, the boy was safe finally.
The next day, when I went to hospital to see the boy, all his family got up, with grateful smiles on their faces. The mother held my hands to her face. With tears in her eyes, She said, “My boy, you are an angel!” What a feeling it was, to help save the life of another person! Driving home that evening, I knew what my final decision would be. The short experience of helping the boy said more than two months of placements could do.
【分析】
这是一篇读后续写题。通过阅读原文可以知道:刚刚毕业的“我 ”不知如何选择职业,“我”的叔叔建议“我”去医院或者工厂实习一段时间,就可以决定自己想要的是什么了。“我”首先选择在银行上班一个月后,到医院实习。然后对比这两家工作的情况,并讲述了自己回家途中遇到的一个学生发病的经过。
【详解】
第一段续写了这件突发事件的经过及自己的急救挽救了一条生命。第二段讲述第二天我去看望这个男孩,他家人的感恩之情溢于言表。他妈妈握着我的手贴在她脸上,说我是他们的天使,这种救人一命的感觉真好。开车回去的那个夜晚,我知道我的决定是什么了。一次经历抵得过“我”两个多月的犹豫不决。
【点睛】
本文描写详略得当,使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如:wasn’t aware of;Driven by a sense of duty;with grateful smiles;With tears in her eyes;感叹句:What a feeling it was, to help save the life of another person! 现在分词作状语:He fell so heavily, lying motionless in the middle of the road;Driving home that evening, I knew what my final decision would be.比较级句型:The short experience of helping the boy said more than two months of placements could do.介词宾语从句:The bus driver wasn’t aware of what was happening and sped away介词with的复合结构作伴随状语:With the help of some passers-by, I lifted him into my car and sent him to the hospital.等等。
 
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