The Miracle
Charlie entered the shop and laid the damp fifty pence on the counter.
“One Wonka’s Whipple-Scrumptious Fudgemallow Delight,’’ he said, remembering how much he had loved the one he had on his birthday.
The man behind the counter looked fat. The fat around his neck bulged out all around the top of his collar like a rubber ring. He handed the chocolate bar to Charlie. Charlie grabbed it and quickly tore off the wrapper and took an enormous bite. Then he took another... and another... and oh, the joy of being able to cram large pieces of something sweet and solid into one’s mouth!
“You look like you wanted that one, sonny, ’’ the shopkeeper said pleasantly.
Charlie nodded, his mouth bulging with chocolate.
The shopkeeper put Charlie’s change on the counter. “Take it easy,” he said. “It’ll give you a tummy-ache if you swallow it like that without chewing.”
Charlie went on wolfing the chocolate. He couldn’t stop. And in less than half a minute, the whole thing had disappeared down his throat. He was quite out of breath, but he felt marvelously, extraordinarily happy. He reached out a hand to take the change. Then he paused. His eyes were just above the level of the counter. They were staring at the silver coins lying there. Surely it wouldn’t matter if he spent just one more.
“I think,” he said quietly, “I think. I’ll have just one more of those chocolate bars. The same kind as before, please.”
“Why not?” the fat shopkeeper said, reaching behind him again and taking another Whipple-Scrumptious Fudgemallow Delight from the shelf. He laid it on the counter.
Charlie picked it up and tore off the wrapper...and suddenly...from underneath the wrapper.. .there came a brilliant flash of gold.
Charlie’s heart stood still.
“It’s a Golden Ticket!” screamed the shopkeeper, leaping about a foot in the air. “You’ve got a Golden Ticket! You’ve found the last Golden Ticket! You will be one of the five lucky children to be shown around Wonka’s chocolate factory. Watch out now, sonny! Don’t tear it as you unwrap it! That thing is precious!”
In a few seconds, there was a crowd of about twenty people clustering around Charlie, and many more were pushing their way in from the street.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Charlie hadn’t moved.
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Paragraph 2:
Then the fat shopkeeper shouted, pushing his way through the crowd and taking Charlie firmly by the arm.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Charlie hadn't moved. He hadn’t even unwrapped the Golden Ticket from around the chocolate bar. He was standing very still, holding it tightly with both hands while the crowd pushed and shouted all around him. He felt quite dizzy. There was a peculiar floating sensation coming over him, as though he were floating up in the air like a balloon. His feet didn’t seem to be touching the ground at all. He could hear his heart thumping away loudly somewhere in his throat.
Paragraph 2:
Then the fat shopkeeper shouted, pushing his way through the crowd and taking Charlie firmly by the arm. “Leave the kid alone, will you! Make way there! Let him out!” And to Charlie, as he led him to the door, he whispered, “Don't you let anybody have it! Take it straight home, quickly, before you lose it!” “Thank you!” Charlie said, and off he went, running through the street as fast as his legs would go. And as he flew past Mr. Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory, he turned and waved at it and sang out, “I’ll be seeing you! I'll be seeing you soon!” And five minutes later he arrived at his own home.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Charlie在买巧克力时得到了参观旺卡巧克力工厂的金券，周围的人迅速围住了他，店主则让对他说不要给任何人，赶紧回家，Charlie谢了店主以最快的速度跑回了家。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Charlie没有动。”可知，第一段可描写Charlie被那么多人围住时的感受和反应，他感到头晕且心在喉咙处剧烈地怦怦直跳。
②由第二段首句内容“这时，那个胖店主大叫着从人群中挤过去，紧紧抓住Charlie的胳膊。”可知，第二段可描写店主是如何叮嘱Charlie的，以及Charlie如何跑回家的。
2.续写线索：Charlie没有动——周围的人推着喊着——Charlie感到头晕——店主抓住Charlie的胳膊——店主让Charlie赶紧回家——Charlie跑回家
3.词汇激活
行为类
打开：unwrap/ open
拿着：hold/ grasp
到家：arrive at home / get home
情绪类
特别的：peculiar / special
迅速：quickly/ rapidly
【点睛】
[高分句型1] He was standing very still, holding it tightly with both hands while the crowd pushed and shouted all around him. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] And as he flew past Mr. Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory, he turned and waved at it and sang out, “I’ll be seeing you! I'll be seeing you soon!”(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
Charlie entered the shop and laid the damp fifty pence on the counter.
“One Wonka’s Whipple-Scrumptious Fudgemallow Delight,’’ he said, remembering how much he had loved the one he had on his birthday.
The man behind the counter looked fat. The fat around his neck bulged out all around the top of his collar like a rubber ring. He handed the chocolate bar to Charlie. Charlie grabbed it and quickly tore off the wrapper and took an enormous bite. Then he took another... and another... and oh, the joy of being able to cram large pieces of something sweet and solid into one’s mouth!
“You look like you wanted that one, sonny, ’’ the shopkeeper said pleasantly.
Charlie nodded, his mouth bulging with chocolate.
The shopkeeper put Charlie’s change on the counter. “Take it easy,” he said. “It’ll give you a tummy-ache if you swallow it like that without chewing.”
Charlie went on wolfing the chocolate. He couldn’t stop. And in less than half a minute, the whole thing had disappeared down his throat. He was quite out of breath, but he felt marvelously, extraordinarily happy. He reached out a hand to take the change. Then he paused. His eyes were just above the level of the counter. They were staring at the silver coins lying there. Surely it wouldn’t matter if he spent just one more.
“I think,” he said quietly, “I think. I’ll have just one more of those chocolate bars. The same kind as before, please.”
“Why not?” the fat shopkeeper said, reaching behind him again and taking another Whipple-Scrumptious Fudgemallow Delight from the shelf. He laid it on the counter.
Charlie picked it up and tore off the wrapper...and suddenly...from underneath the wrapper.. .there came a brilliant flash of gold.
Charlie’s heart stood still.
“It’s a Golden Ticket!” screamed the shopkeeper, leaping about a foot in the air. “You’ve got a Golden Ticket! You’ve found the last Golden Ticket! You will be one of the five lucky children to be shown around Wonka’s chocolate factory. Watch out now, sonny! Don’t tear it as you unwrap it! That thing is precious!”
In a few seconds, there was a crowd of about twenty people clustering around Charlie, and many more were pushing their way in from the street.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:
Charlie hadn’t moved.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2:
Then the fat shopkeeper shouted, pushing his way through the crowd and taking Charlie firmly by the arm.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Paragraph 1:
Charlie hadn't moved. He hadn’t even unwrapped the Golden Ticket from around the chocolate bar. He was standing very still, holding it tightly with both hands while the crowd pushed and shouted all around him. He felt quite dizzy. There was a peculiar floating sensation coming over him, as though he were floating up in the air like a balloon. His feet didn’t seem to be touching the ground at all. He could hear his heart thumping away loudly somewhere in his throat.
Paragraph 2:
Then the fat shopkeeper shouted, pushing his way through the crowd and taking Charlie firmly by the arm. “Leave the kid alone, will you! Make way there! Let him out!” And to Charlie, as he led him to the door, he whispered, “Don't you let anybody have it! Take it straight home, quickly, before you lose it!” “Thank you!” Charlie said, and off he went, running through the street as fast as his legs would go. And as he flew past Mr. Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory, he turned and waved at it and sang out, “I’ll be seeing you! I'll be seeing you soon!” And five minutes later he arrived at his own home.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Charlie在买巧克力时得到了参观旺卡巧克力工厂的金券，周围的人迅速围住了他，店主则让对他说不要给任何人，赶紧回家，Charlie谢了店主以最快的速度跑回了家。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Charlie没有动。”可知，第一段可描写Charlie被那么多人围住时的感受和反应，他感到头晕且心在喉咙处剧烈地怦怦直跳。
②由第二段首句内容“这时，那个胖店主大叫着从人群中挤过去，紧紧抓住Charlie的胳膊。”可知，第二段可描写店主是如何叮嘱Charlie的，以及Charlie如何跑回家的。
2.续写线索：Charlie没有动——周围的人推着喊着——Charlie感到头晕——店主抓住Charlie的胳膊——店主让Charlie赶紧回家——Charlie跑回家
3.词汇激活
行为类
打开：unwrap/ open
拿着：hold/ grasp
到家：arrive at home / get home
情绪类
特别的：peculiar / special
迅速：quickly/ rapidly
【点睛】
[高分句型1] He was standing very still, holding it tightly with both hands while the crowd pushed and shouted all around him. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] And as he flew past Mr. Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory, he turned and waved at it and sang out, “I’ll be seeing you! I'll be seeing you soon!”(运用了as引导时间状语从句)
