6．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was on September 5th, my birthday, that we left Cambridge and moved away. We went to the seaside，to our holiday house，which was now to be our permanent home.
I remember the day was cold and grey， in falling slowly but constantly. My father drove in silence. No one spoke and all we could hear was the sound of the tyres on the wet road When we got to the small house near the sea，my mother quietly started to unpack the few things we had brought with us. Carol，Julie and I went down to the beach. We said we were going to look for crabs in the rockpools but actually，we just wanted to get away from our father and his cold silence.
We climbed along the rocks by the side of the beach. Julie and Carol became interested in some shells they found in one of the pools. I wandered away, lost in my private thoughts. It was my birthday, but no one had said “Happy Birthday” to me. I had not received any cards or presents.
I walked down to the seashore, where the waves were breaking lazily against the muddy sand. Suddenly, I saw something green sticking out of the water. I looked at it more carefully. The green thing moved closer and closer to the shore, and when it was almost near enough for me to touch, I realized what it was.
It was a bottle. I went over and picked it up, all the time looking at it. It seemed old, and had no label on it. Then 1 realized there was something inside. Slowly, I pulled out the wet cork from the top of the bottle. Inside was a piece of paper. With great care, 1 took out the folded paper and opened it.
Written on it were these words:
“To whomsoever finds this bottle, I promise you a new friend. ”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
I stared at the paper and then looked around.
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Paragraph 2
As I opened my eyes, I found my father standing right beside me.
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【答案】Paragraph 1
I stared at the paper and then looked around. There came a boy, who promised to be my friend. I didn’t know what to say, so I kept in silence. He told me that he wanted to be my new friend. “what was said in the paper was true” I said to myself. and he took a lot of presents for my birthday. I was very touched to receive so many gifts.it really was an amazing bottle.
Paragraph 2
As I opened my eyes, I found my father standing right beside me. My father told me that it was time for me to go to school. He asked me why I woke up so late. That’s because I had a sweet dream. In the dream, I made a new friend, and he gave me many presents to celebrate my birthday, “It’s a sweet dream.” said my father. “but one thing is true, today is your birthday.” Have a look at what we got for you. When I opened the box, it was the football I really wanted. I could have never been happier. It was then I realized that my family members were also my best friends.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在我的生日那天，我们一家人去了海边的度假屋。父亲默默地开着车，当我们到了海边的那所小房子后，为了逃避父亲和他冰冷的沉默，我去了海岸边，注意到了一个瓶子，里面有张纸条，上面写着：“谁找到了这个瓶子，我保证给你一个新朋友”
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我盯着这张纸条，然后环顾四周。”可推断，第一段可描写作者捡到瓶子环顾四周后发生的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“我睁开眼睛，发现父亲就站在我身边。”可推断，第二段可描写作者醒来看到父亲后的事情。
2.续写线索：过生日—失落——礼物——开心——梦境
3.词汇激活
行为类
①保持： keep/remain/stay
②意识到：realize/learn
情绪类
①感到： touch/move
②吃惊的：amazing/surpring/astonishing
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He told me that he was my new friend.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句作tell的宾语）
[高分句型2]. That’s because I had a sweet dream.（由连接词because引导表语从句）
It was on September 5th, my birthday, that we left Cambridge and moved away. We went to the seaside，to our holiday house，which was now to be our permanent home.
I remember the day was cold and grey， in falling slowly but constantly. My father drove in silence. No one spoke and all we could hear was the sound of the tyres on the wet road When we got to the small house near the sea，my mother quietly started to unpack the few things we had brought with us. Carol，Julie and I went down to the beach. We said we were going to look for crabs in the rockpools but actually，we just wanted to get away from our father and his cold silence.
We climbed along the rocks by the side of the beach. Julie and Carol became interested in some shells they found in one of the pools. I wandered away, lost in my private thoughts. It was my birthday, but no one had said “Happy Birthday” to me. I had not received any cards or presents.
I walked down to the seashore, where the waves were breaking lazily against the muddy sand. Suddenly, I saw something green sticking out of the water. I looked at it more carefully. The green thing moved closer and closer to the shore, and when it was almost near enough for me to touch, I realized what it was.
It was a bottle. I went over and picked it up, all the time looking at it. It seemed old, and had no label on it. Then 1 realized there was something inside. Slowly, I pulled out the wet cork from the top of the bottle. Inside was a piece of paper. With great care, 1 took out the folded paper and opened it.
Written on it were these words:
“To whomsoever finds this bottle, I promise you a new friend. ”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1
I stared at the paper and then looked around.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2
As I opened my eyes, I found my father standing right beside me.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Paragraph 1
I stared at the paper and then looked around. There came a boy, who promised to be my friend. I didn’t know what to say, so I kept in silence. He told me that he wanted to be my new friend. “what was said in the paper was true” I said to myself. and he took a lot of presents for my birthday. I was very touched to receive so many gifts.it really was an amazing bottle.
Paragraph 2
As I opened my eyes, I found my father standing right beside me. My father told me that it was time for me to go to school. He asked me why I woke up so late. That’s because I had a sweet dream. In the dream, I made a new friend, and he gave me many presents to celebrate my birthday, “It’s a sweet dream.” said my father. “but one thing is true, today is your birthday.” Have a look at what we got for you. When I opened the box, it was the football I really wanted. I could have never been happier. It was then I realized that my family members were also my best friends.
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在我的生日那天，我们一家人去了海边的度假屋。父亲默默地开着车，当我们到了海边的那所小房子后，为了逃避父亲和他冰冷的沉默，我去了海岸边，注意到了一个瓶子，里面有张纸条，上面写着：“谁找到了这个瓶子，我保证给你一个新朋友”
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我盯着这张纸条，然后环顾四周。”可推断，第一段可描写作者捡到瓶子环顾四周后发生的事情。
②由第二段首句内容“我睁开眼睛，发现父亲就站在我身边。”可推断，第二段可描写作者醒来看到父亲后的事情。
2.续写线索：过生日—失落——礼物——开心——梦境
3.词汇激活
行为类
①保持： keep/remain/stay
②意识到：realize/learn
情绪类
①感到： touch/move
②吃惊的：amazing/surpring/astonishing
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. He told me that he was my new friend.（由连接词that引导的宾语从句作tell的宾语）
[高分句型2]. That’s because I had a sweet dream.（由连接词because引导表语从句）
