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Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation.Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant.I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity.I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos.With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work.I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges.The most important thing I've learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.
Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation.Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant.I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity.I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love taking photos.With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work.I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges.The most important thing I've learned are to improve myself after I get my dream job.
