55. 假如你是李华,即将进入高中学习,请你写一封电子邮件给英国的笔友Linda,谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧,并请她给出建议。

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55.    假如你是李华,即将进入高中学习,请你写一封电子邮件给英国的笔友Linda,谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧,并请她给出建议。
参考词汇:
Expectation(向往) meet new classmates and teachers
make decisions by myself
choose favorite subjects
Worry have no time
after-school activities
fall behind
be difficult to study
 
注意:
1)信中不得出现真实人名,校名和地名;
2)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Linda,
How's it going? I'll study in senior high school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作思路
本题属于书信作文,题目的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据参考词汇写给笔友Linda写一封电子邮件,谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时,再阅读一遍,减少语法错误,不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
参考范文
Dear Linda,
How's it going? I'll study in senior high school. I'm so happy because I will meet new classmates and teachers. I'll also be allowed to make more decisions by myself and choose my favorite subjects. Besides, I expect there is a library where I can read.
However, I also have some worries. First, I'm afraid I'll have no time for after-school activities. Second, perhaps I'll fall behind others in some subjects. It's always difficult to study maths well. At last, I'm afraid the food in the new school won't agree with me. What can I do with these problems?
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,用一般现在时和一般将来时分段谈了自己对高中生活的向往和担忧,运用了题干中所给的参考词汇,并进行了适当发挥。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
单词和短语:be allowed to do sth.;make decisions;besides;however;after-school activities;perhaps;fall behind;at last;agree with;do with;look forward to。
句型:特殊疑问句;because引导的原因状语从句;宾语从句;there be句型;where引导的定语从句;it固定句型。
 
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