假定你是李华,收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件,获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。

(一)【2019 •福建】

假定你是李华,收到英国笔友 Harry 的邮件,获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数 80 左右。

参考词汇:congratulation
祝贺注意事项:
1. 回复邮件时可适当发挥,邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Harry,
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Yours,
Li Hua

写作思路
此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文,在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过系统的训练。  学生可根据日常所授的写作模板,对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。
(1)结构:开头表示祝贺,使用所给提示词;
(2)正文要点:表达兴趣并说明原因,至少两点(如热点科技,对科技创新的兴趣,对生活的改变,对医疗、救援   的帮助等);
写作时从单词拼写到句子结构,从时态到语态,都应该注意统一。在打草稿时把需要用到的关键词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁边,以尽量规避错误。
参考范文
Dear Harry,
Congratulations!How glad I am to share your good news!
I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future, they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such as cooking, cleaning the house and so on.
Hoping you will make greater progress.

Yours,
Li Hua

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