61.文明礼貌表现的不仅是个人形象、城市形象、市民素质,也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。

(三十六) (2020 •怀化市)
 
第四节  情景作文
61.文明礼貌表现的不仅是个人形象、城市形象、市民素质,也在一定程度上反映了社会的文明程度。为配合我市开展"创建文明城市"(build a civilized city)活动,学校号召学生在校内校外做一个文明的中学生,特举办"How to behave well"为主题的英文征文比赛。请根据以下提示,写一篇短文。
1. be on time and honest; be polite and friendly to others; help others
2. respect parents and teachers; help parents do housework
3. follow the traffic rules; not make noise in public
4. protect the environment; take care of flowers and trees; not throw litter everywhere
5. ……
 
 
注意:
1.文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2.内容应包含表格中的要点并适当发挥;
3.词数:80词左右;
4.文章的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
How to behave well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here is what we should do and shouldn't be allowed to do.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
本题要求我们根据所给的信息,以"How to behave well"为主题写篇英语短文,在写作时,我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排,使文章的意思更自然。可以使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯,更出彩。
参考范文
How to Behave Well
To be a civilized student is very important for a student. Here is what we should do and shouldn't be allowed to do.
As a middle school student, I think it's very important to keep our environment clean and tidy and take care of flowers and trees. Don't throw litter everywhere. And we should respect parents and teachers and help parents do housework.
We are supposed to do everything on time and keep promises. Never lie to others or say dirty words. We should be polite to others and ready to help others in need. And remember to obey the traffic rules, family rules and school rules. We'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city and school will become more and more beautiful.

【名师点评】
本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
高分亮点:
短语:be supposed to,be polite to,remember to do,in need,obey the traffic rules。
句型:宾语从句I think…;祈使句Don't…;if引导条件状语从句;it做形式主语It's very important to do…。
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