假如你是英语校报的编辑李平,请你根据以信息,给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信,欢迎他们来到新学校,并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。

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假如你是英语校报的编辑李平,请你根据以信息,给新入学的学弟学妹们写一封信,欢迎他们来到新学校,并对他们在学校如何做合格的中学生提出建议。
写作要点:
1. 欢迎他们来到新学校。
2. 介绍学校:
(1) 课程有趣;
(2) 有多名外教;
(3) 活动丰富。
3. 请对他们在学校如何做合格的(qualified)中学生提出具体建议。
写作要求:
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear new friends,
It’s my pleasure to write you this letter. 
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
写作思路
这是一篇书信作文,内容是关于学校生活的。首先认真审题,看清题目中的要求和要点;提示内容就是本文的写作要点。这些要点构成写作的基本框架。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来,并适当发挥想象提出自己的建议。不要遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写,要注意主谓一致等问题。在写作过程中,要注意句与句段与段之间的过渡,必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词,使文章过渡平稳,自然流畅;最后要细心复核检查,确保正确无误。
参考范文
Dear new friends,
It's my pleasure to write you this letter. Welcome to our new school. Our school is clean and beautiful. The classrooms are big and bright. All the subjects are very interesting. I am good at English. There are many foreign teachers in our school. In our spare time, we can communicate with them and improve our oral English skills. Our after class activities are also rich and colorful. There are different clubs in our school. You can take part in all kinds of activities you like.
Now you are going to be middle school students. How to be a qualified middle school student? At first, you should follow the school rules. It's also important to have good study habits. You must listen to the teachers carefully in class.I think you should learn to share things with your classmates and help each other.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
 
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