56.初中三年的学习生活即将结束,请你根据下图的内容要点提示,为学校英语俱乐部写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生在学习生活上提几点建议

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56.初中三年的学习生活即将结束,请你根据下图的内容要点提示,为学校英语俱乐部写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生在学习生活上提几点建议,并祝福他们在未来的学习生活中过的愉快。
 
注意:1. 文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 词数:80左右;
3. 短文的开头已给出,不计人总词数。
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
这是一篇给材料作文,自己即将毕业,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。结合所给的材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,以第二人称为主,要注意主谓一致,所写的句子要符合英语语法,用自己熟悉的单词和句式来写。
参考范文
Welcome to our school! In junior high school, life will be different from before. Here are some suggestions about the study and life for you.
Firstly, you'll have more subjects to learn, it is important to find good learning methods. Secondly, in order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Thirdly, you can join some clubs to make the school life more colorful in your spare time. Fourthly, you'd better get on well with your classmates and help each other. In addition, it is a good choice to read more books and make more friends. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
【名师点评】
这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求,根据内容要点提示给七年级新生提了一些关于学习和生活的建议,并进行了适当发挥。第一段点明主旨,第二段给出建议和自己的祝福。例文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
高分亮点:
单词和短语:be different from;good leaning methods;in order to do sth.;be good at;do exercise;in your spare time;get on well with;help each other;in addition;at last;be there for sb.。
句型:祈使句;倒装句;it固定句型;if引导的条件状语从句;宾语从句。

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