（十四）【2020•湖北省黄石市】
76．我市某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择两到三点，写一篇题为“How to keep healthy”的短文，参加此次活动。
要点：
1.运动有益身心健康。多锻炼，如跑步、爬山、骑车等；
2.养成健康的饮食习惯, 如多喝水和牛奶，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品和快餐；
3.学习有计划，早睡早起不熬夜，劳逸结合；
4.乐观、积极、友好，与同学和睦相处。
要求：
1.可结合自身事例、适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯
2.80词左右。（无须写标题，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：keep healthy physically and mentally保持身心健康
regularly有规律地 optimistic乐观的
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life.
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【写作思路】
本题为材料作文，要求就“How to keep healthy”为主题写一篇短文。时态用现在时，人称用第一人称或第二人称。
【参考范文】
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life. What should we do to keep healthy?
First, exercise is good for keeping healthy physically and mentally. We can participate in regular exercise, such as cycling, mountain climbing, running and so on. Second, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. We should drink more water and milk, and eat more vegetables and fruits. And we should avoid eating too much junk food and fast food. Third, we should be optimistic, positive and friendly. We should also get along well with classmates.
If we try to do that, we’ll be a healthier person.
【名师点评】
例文分三段，首段用于引出文章主题，第二段则详细叙述了应该如何健康生活，第三段做结尾，倡议人们按照上面的建议去做，去健康生活。例文层次分明，思路清晰，叙述流畅，是一篇合格的例文。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be good for，participate in，such as，and so on，get along well with。
句型：
（1）Second, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.（it作形式主语）
（2）If we try to do that, we’ll be a healthier person.（if引导条件状语从句）
76．我市某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择两到三点，写一篇题为“How to keep healthy”的短文，参加此次活动。
要点：
1.运动有益身心健康。多锻炼，如跑步、爬山、骑车等；
2.养成健康的饮食习惯, 如多喝水和牛奶，多吃蔬菜和水果，少吃垃圾食品和快餐；
3.学习有计划，早睡早起不熬夜，劳逸结合；
4.乐观、积极、友好，与同学和睦相处。
要求：
1.可结合自身事例、适当发挥；语言通顺，意思连贯
2.80词左右。（无须写标题，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）
参考词汇：keep healthy physically and mentally保持身心健康
regularly有规律地 optimistic乐观的
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本题为材料作文，要求就“How to keep healthy”为主题写一篇短文。时态用现在时，人称用第一人称或第二人称。
【参考范文】
Keeping healthy plays an important role in our daily life. What should we do to keep healthy?
First, exercise is good for keeping healthy physically and mentally. We can participate in regular exercise, such as cycling, mountain climbing, running and so on. Second, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. We should drink more water and milk, and eat more vegetables and fruits. And we should avoid eating too much junk food and fast food. Third, we should be optimistic, positive and friendly. We should also get along well with classmates.
If we try to do that, we’ll be a healthier person.
【名师点评】
例文分三段，首段用于引出文章主题，第二段则详细叙述了应该如何健康生活，第三段做结尾，倡议人们按照上面的建议去做，去健康生活。例文层次分明，思路清晰，叙述流畅，是一篇合格的例文。
3.高分亮点：
短语：be good for，participate in，such as，and so on，get along well with。
句型：
（1）Second, it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits.（it作形式主语）
（2）If we try to do that, we’ll be a healthier person.（if引导条件状语从句）
