第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
52. 假定你是李华，在美国某高中做交换生，对你所租借的小区物业管理有些不满，请你用英语给物业经理写一封意见信，内容包括：
1.车辆停放较乱；2.垃圾没有及时清理；3.你的建议。
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a resident of the neighborhood and I’m writing to raise some problems
Firstly, there is limited parking space for so many cars. As a result, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing much inconvenience to us. Secondly, the dustbins are not cleared in time. As temperature goes up, the rubbish not only gives off a terrible smell but also pollutes our environment. Thus, I suggest you make standard parking space and have the car owners follow the rules. Besides, cleaners should be ordered to work according to the timetable that you make.
I hope you can help us have a nice living environment. Thank you for your time.
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求李华给小区物业写封邮件，反馈小区车乱停乱放、垃圾未及时清理的问题，并提出整改建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.说明车辆停放较乱的情况；
2.说明垃圾没有及时清理的情况；
3.给出你的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
raise some problems; bring much inconvenience to us; go up; give off; not only… but also; be ordered to
第三步：连词成句
1.I’m a resident of the neighborhood and I’m writing to raise some problems.
2.Firstly, there is limited parking space for so many cars.
3.As a result, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing much inconvenience to us.
4.As temperature goes up, the rubbish not only gives off a terrible smell but also pollutes our environment.
5.Thus, I suggest you make standard parking space and have the car owners follow the rules. Besides, cleaners should be ordered to work according to the timetable that you make.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly
2.表并列补充关系：Besides
3.表转折对比关系(供参考)：However, On the contrary
4.表因果关系：Thus, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a result, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing much inconvenience to us.（是用来现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] As temperature goes up, the rubbish not only gives off a terrible smell but also pollutes our environment.（使用了as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3] I hope you can help us have a nice living environment.（使用了省略了that的宾语从句）
52. 假定你是李华，在美国某高中做交换生，对你所租借的小区物业管理有些不满，请你用英语给物业经理写一封意见信，内容包括：
1.车辆停放较乱；2.垃圾没有及时清理；3.你的建议。
【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m a resident of the neighborhood and I’m writing to raise some problems
Firstly, there is limited parking space for so many cars. As a result, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing much inconvenience to us. Secondly, the dustbins are not cleared in time. As temperature goes up, the rubbish not only gives off a terrible smell but also pollutes our environment. Thus, I suggest you make standard parking space and have the car owners follow the rules. Besides, cleaners should be ordered to work according to the timetable that you make.
I hope you can help us have a nice living environment. Thank you for your time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】Li Hua
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求李华给小区物业写封邮件，反馈小区车乱停乱放、垃圾未及时清理的问题，并提出整改建议。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1.说明车辆停放较乱的情况；
2.说明垃圾没有及时清理的情况；
3.给出你的建议。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
raise some problems; bring much inconvenience to us; go up; give off; not only… but also; be ordered to
第三步：连词成句
1.I’m a resident of the neighborhood and I’m writing to raise some problems.
2.Firstly, there is limited parking space for so many cars.
3.As a result, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing much inconvenience to us.
4.As temperature goes up, the rubbish not only gives off a terrible smell but also pollutes our environment.
5.Thus, I suggest you make standard parking space and have the car owners follow the rules. Besides, cleaners should be ordered to work according to the timetable that you make.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly, Secondly
2.表并列补充关系：Besides
3.表转折对比关系(供参考)：However, On the contrary
4.表因果关系：Thus, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1] As a result, some cars park everywhere and even in the way, bringing much inconvenience to us.（是用来现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2] As temperature goes up, the rubbish not only gives off a terrible smell but also pollutes our environment.（使用了as引导的时间状语从句）
[高分句型3] I hope you can help us have a nice living environment.（使用了省略了that的宾语从句）
