72. 假定你是李华,你校校报正在面向全体学生征稿,题目为“My Favorite Trip”。请你用英语写一篇短文应征,内容包括:


本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生以“My Favorite Trip”为题目,写一篇征文。
【详解】第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:
1. 目的地,时间,交通工具;
2. 途中所见所闻;
3. 旅游感受。
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
Take a train,some delicious food,local resident,easy-going,talk with,bless,live in a harmonious atmosphere,strength,rather than,as well as
第三步:连词成句(包含关键句,至少3句)
I took the K918 train from Lanzhou to Lhasa, which almost cost me 28 hours.
When I arrived at Lhasa, we ate some delicious food.
We all like them. I was shocked by local residents who are so kind and easy-going.
They like talking with people and strongly believe Buddha always bless them.
Everybody lives in a harmonious atmosphere.
Having traveled Tibet gives me strength to change myself.
Learn to follow my heart rather than bother by others' advices as well as live people with humanity.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last(供参考)
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including(供参考)
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…(供参考) 
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result(供参考) 
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
【点睛】[高分句型1] On last winter holiday, I visited my uncle who lives and makes business in Tibet.使用了who引导的定语从句 
[高分句型2] Having traveled Tibet gives me strength to change myself.使用了动名词作主语
[高分句型3] I think that is all I get from that trip.使用了定语从句
 
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