假如你是光明中学学生会主席李华,学校近期将邀请在北大任教的史蒂夫( Steve)教授发表题为《中英文化差异》演讲。请你代表学生会在学校广播站广播一则通知。
内容包含:
1.活动的时间地点(10月10号周三下午2点至4点,学校礼堂)。
2.活动的环节和要求。
3.门票领取地点学生会办公室。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:礼堂 auditorium
【答案】Attention please！
I’m Lihua, president of the students’ union. I have an announcement to make! A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.
The lecture is scheduled to last for 2 hours from 2: 00 pm to 4: 00 pm on Wednesday afternoon of October 10th, and it has been decided to be held in the school auditorium. Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.
If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket. Do remember to set your cells to silent mode and be there on time.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一篇通知，通知学生参加在北大任教的史蒂夫教授发表题为《中英文化差异》的演讲。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
结构：总分法
要求：包含活动的时间地点(10月10号周三下午2点至4点,学校礼堂)；活动的环节和要求；门票领取地点学生会办公室。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
president；students’ union；announcement；theme；deliver；distinguish
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m Lihua, president of the students’ union.
2. I have an announcement to make!
3. A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.
4. The lecture is scheduled to last for 2 hours from 2: 00 pm to 4: 00 pm on Wednesday afternoon of October 10th, and it has been decided to be held in the school auditorium.
5. Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.
6. If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket.
7. Do remember to set your cells to silent mode and be there on time.
8. That’s all. Thank you!
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“whose，where，and”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“president；students’ union；announcement；theme；deliver；distinguish”以及定语从句“A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.”“Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.”、状语从句“If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
内容包含:
1.活动的时间地点(10月10号周三下午2点至4点,学校礼堂)。
2.活动的环节和要求。
3.门票领取地点学生会办公室。
注意:1.词数100左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:礼堂 auditorium
【答案】Attention please！
I’m Lihua, president of the students’ union. I have an announcement to make! A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.
The lecture is scheduled to last for 2 hours from 2: 00 pm to 4: 00 pm on Wednesday afternoon of October 10th, and it has been decided to be held in the school auditorium. Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.
If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket. Do remember to set your cells to silent mode and be there on time.
That’s all. Thank you!
【分析】
这是一篇提纲类作文。要求考生用英语写一篇通知，通知学生参加在北大任教的史蒂夫教授发表题为《中英文化差异》的演讲。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：提纲类作文
时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时为主。
结构：总分法
要求：包含活动的时间地点(10月10号周三下午2点至4点,学校礼堂)；活动的环节和要求；门票领取地点学生会办公室。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
president；students’ union；announcement；theme；deliver；distinguish
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m Lihua, president of the students’ union.
2. I have an announcement to make!
3. A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.
4. The lecture is scheduled to last for 2 hours from 2: 00 pm to 4: 00 pm on Wednesday afternoon of October 10th, and it has been decided to be held in the school auditorium.
5. Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.
6. If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket.
7. Do remember to set your cells to silent mode and be there on time.
8. That’s all. Thank you!
第四步：连句成篇
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步：润色修改
【点睛】
文章结构合理，思路清晰，使用了恰当的连接词及词组使行文连贯，如“whose，where，and”，也运用了一些高级词汇和表达，如“president；students’ union；announcement；theme；deliver；distinguish”以及定语从句“A lecture whose theme is cultural differences between China and English will be delivered by Steve who is a distinguished professor at Peking University.”“Following the lecture, a wonderful forum will get everyone present involved where you can consult Professor Steve about anything concerning the topic.”、状语从句“If you take a great interest in the lecture, please come to the students’ union’s office for the free ticket.”等，增加了文章的亮点，体现了学生较高的英语学科素养。
