第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
71. 假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning, everyone! Today, please allow me deliver a brief speech on the career I will take up in the future. Undoubtedly, I have great expectations for the future job. My dream career is to be the tour guide.
Since my early age, I had been admiring tour guides which travel worldwide, enjoying the spectacular scenery, appreciating different cultures and enriching their life experience at the same time. Beside, this career is financially rewarding as well as so that I can live a well-off life. Additionally, I will have more opportunities to meet people from all walk of life, which is both challenging and interesting.
To be a good guide is no easily job, for it requires years of hard practice and continual learning. It is the wide range of knowledge, professionalism and dedication that shape a highly qualified tour guide. Therefore, my dream cannot be fulfilled without do tough work to paves the way.
【答案】第一处：deliver前加to
第二处：the→a
第三处：had→have
第四处：which→who
第五处：Beside→Besides
第六处：as well as第二个as去掉
第七处：walk→walks
第八处：easily→easy
第九处：do→doing
第十处：paves→pave
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
71. 假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Good morning, everyone! Today, please allow me deliver a brief speech on the career I will take up in the future. Undoubtedly, I have great expectations for the future job. My dream career is to be the tour guide.
Since my early age, I had been admiring tour guides which travel worldwide, enjoying the spectacular scenery, appreciating different cultures and enriching their life experience at the same time. Beside, this career is financially rewarding as well as so that I can live a well-off life. Additionally, I will have more opportunities to meet people from all walk of life, which is both challenging and interesting.
To be a good guide is no easily job, for it requires years of hard practice and continual learning. It is the wide range of knowledge, professionalism and dedication that shape a highly qualified tour guide. Therefore, my dream cannot be fulfilled without do tough work to paves the way.
【答案】第一处：deliver前加to
第二处：the→a
第三处：had→have
第四处：which→who
第五处：Beside→Besides
第六处：as well as第二个as去掉
第七处：walk→walks
第八处：easily→easy
第九处：do→doing
第十处：paves→pave
