55.在日常学习和生活中,我们经常需要与人合作( cooperate)。假设你是李华,请你就如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括:

55.在日常学习和生活中,我们经常需要与人合作( cooperate)。假设你是李华,请你就如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。内容包括:
(1)合作的技巧(如耐心倾听,礼貌建议……);
(2)合作的意义(如相互学习……)。
要求:
(1)80词左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Be a Great Partner
Hello, everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life.  ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
写作思路
该书面表达主要围绕如何成为一名优秀的合作伙伴写一篇英语演讲稿。本文已经给出了写作要点,动笔前要先认真阅读要点,然后围绕要点适当发挥。作文的开头已给出,写作中,应承接短文的开头,注意描述的全面性,将提示的内容全部利用上;结合材料内容,可知本文主要是用一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。
 
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Be a Great Partner
Hello, everyone!
As we all know, cooperation is of great importance in our daily life. Those who can cooperate with others well are called great partners, so the question remains: how can we be a great partner? 
There are certain techniques we can learn to help to be better. First of all, we should always listen to others patiently and carefully. Only by listening can we understand our team members and be more effective. In the meantime, we should always be polite when we give advice. That’s how we show respect and it’s the only way we can make progress.
By cooperating with other people, we can improve our communication skills. By cooperating with other people, we can learn about new perspectives towards things. By cooperating with other people, we can make progress in both the project and self-improvement.
Thank you for your listening.
【名师点评】
本文采用四段式,第一段开篇引出如何成为优秀的合作者;第二段是合作的技巧;第三段是合作的意义;第四段以感谢结尾。整篇例文要点齐全,内容完整,条例清晰。多种句式交替使用,使文章增色不少。
高分亮点:
短语:as we all know;be of great importance;cooperate with;first of all;listen to sb.;in the meantime;make progress;learn about;both…and…;thank sb. for sth.。
句型:as引导的非限制性定语从句;who引导的限制性定语从句;how特殊疑问句;that(可省略)引导的限制性定语从句;only位于句首的倒装句;when引导的时间状语从句;By cooperating with other people…排比句。
 
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