（十二）【2020•陕西省】
61． 某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园, 健康生活”的征稿活动。请你根据以下图示内容积极投稿, 倡导同学们“爱护校园环境, 健康快乐生活”。
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1.参考提示内容, 可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整;
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出, 但不计人总词数。)
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【写作思路】
该题目属于说明文写作。在写作时应根据图片内容提示讲述学生健康校园生活的一些建议。
【参考范文】
Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here I’ve got some ideas to share with you.
First, it’s important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day, because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, it’s good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, we’d better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well with each other and keep happy, we’ll enjoy a happy and healthy school life.
【名师点评】
例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作。介绍自学生健康校园生活的一些建议分成四点来写，叙述完整且条理清晰。
3.高分亮点：
短语：need to; make it; share with; for example; do some sports；and so on；look after；such as；get on well with。
句型：because引导的原因状语从句；it做形式主语的句子；if引导的条件状语从句。
