56. 深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席,希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点,代表学生会写一篇倡议书。

(十一)【2020•广东省深圳市】
56.    深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席,希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点,代表学生会写一篇倡议书。
环境保护 ①垃圾分类;②绿色出行
公益慈善 ①志愿服务;②……
人际交往 ①诚信友善;②……
 
要求:
1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数);
2、要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3、条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:分类 sort out    志愿者volunteer     贡献 contribution
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.
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All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
写作思路
该题目属于倡议书写作。在写作时应承接短文开头;第一段引出话题;第二段写倡议缘由;第三段具体介绍如何做;第四段进行展望;第五段号召大家行动起来。
写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来进行写作;时态采用一般现在时为主,写作时要注意语句通顺,语意连贯,紧扣要点,注意句子之间的连接与过渡,要注意涵盖所给提示。
参考范文
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.(引出话题)
It's well known that Shenzhen is striving for one of the ten civilized cities in China, and now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contributions.(倡议缘由)
Firstly, more changes in our daily life, such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way, can be made to protect the city environment. What's more, to make Shenzhen a loving city, we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.【高分句型一】 Last but not least, get along with others in an honest and friendly way. We'd better avoid talking about others' privacy if we want to show our respect.(具体介绍如何做)
I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.(展望)
All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.【高分句型二】(号召)
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
 
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