（十）【2020•绵阳市】
51.假定你是李华，请回复笔友Mike的邮件，给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
【写作思路】
本文是一篇书信作文，假如你是李华，要求你根据笔友Mike的邮件，给他写一封回信，至少给出3条建议并说明理由。首先要注意邮件的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Hi, Mike.
I'm glad to hear from you. And congratulations on completing your studies. But I know you are not allowed to travel abroad.I'm so disappointed.
However, there are things you can do at home to prepare for future trips to China. Firstly, you can learn about Chinese places of interest and customs through the Internet or TV. Secondly, I can send you pictures of some famous tourist attractions in China by email, such as the Great Wall in Beijing, the Summer Palace and so on. Thirdly, you can talk with local Chinese to help you better understand China and its culture. Finally, I hope you have a good time in the summer vacation.
I am looking forward to your early trip to China .
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第二人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：hear from，learn about，places of interest，by email，such as，so on，talk with，have a good time，look forward to。
句型：I hope you have a good time in the summer vacation. 我希望你在暑假过得愉快。I hope后接宾语从句。
I am looking forward to your early trip to China.我期待着你早日来中国旅行。look forward to期待……，固定词组。
51.假定你是李华，请回复笔友Mike的邮件，给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。
| To: Li Hua From: Mike |
| Hi, Li Hua. Is everything going well? Summer holiday is coming. I planned a graduation trip to China with my best friend. But we are not allowed to travel abroad. I am so disappointed. Would you please give me some advice? All the best, Mike |
| To: Mike From: Li Hua |
| Hi, Mike. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua |
本文是一篇书信作文，假如你是李华，要求你根据笔友Mike的邮件，给他写一封回信，至少给出3条建议并说明理由。首先要注意邮件的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
To: Li Hua
From: Mike
Hi, Mike.
I'm glad to hear from you. And congratulations on completing your studies. But I know you are not allowed to travel abroad.I'm so disappointed.
However, there are things you can do at home to prepare for future trips to China. Firstly, you can learn about Chinese places of interest and customs through the Internet or TV. Secondly, I can send you pictures of some famous tourist attractions in China by email, such as the Great Wall in Beijing, the Summer Palace and so on. Thirdly, you can talk with local Chinese to help you better understand China and its culture. Finally, I hope you have a good time in the summer vacation.
I am looking forward to your early trip to China .
【名师点评】
例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第二人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：hear from，learn about，places of interest，by email，such as，so on，talk with，have a good time，look forward to。
句型：I hope you have a good time in the summer vacation. 我希望你在暑假过得愉快。I hope后接宾语从句。
I am looking forward to your early trip to China.我期待着你早日来中国旅行。look forward to期待……，固定词组。
