（六）【2020•重庆市A卷】
62.国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题，写一篇短文参赛。
要求:
1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……)；
2. 校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……)；
3. ……
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，学校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。要求以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题，写一篇短文参赛。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future.
As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.
【解析】
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
2.高分亮点：
短语：a lot，in the future，what's more，set up，such as，look forward to，do well in。
句型：I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. 我期待着在新学期上这门课。look forward to doing sth期待做某事，固定搭配。
I believe I will do well in it. 我相信我会做得很好。I believe后接宾语从句；do well in在……方面做得好。
62.国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，你校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。请你以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题，写一篇短文参赛。
要求:
1. 80-120词，开头已给出，不计人总词数；
2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：
1. 劳动教育的意义(学习生活技能、养成良好习惯……)；
2. 校内劳动教育建议(开设种植课、组织做蛋糕比赛……)；
3. ……
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
本文是一篇材料作文，国家提出了将劳动教育(Labor Education)纳入中小学国家课程的方案。为此，学校校报英语栏目English World就开展劳动教育的意义，以及如何在校园内开展劳动教育，发起征文。要求以 "Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School" 为题，写一篇短文参赛。首先要认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。
【参考范文】
Some Advice on Developing Labor Education in Our School
It's reported that Labor Education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think it's important. We can learn some life skills and form good habits. Both will help us a lot in the future.
As for how to run the course in our school, I have some ideas. The school can offer classes to teach us how to do the cleaning and grow plants. What's more, the school can set up some clubs, such as cooking club and paper-cutting club. The school can also hold competitions to see who is the best in making cakes. Such activities will make our school life more colorful and meaningful.
I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. I believe I will do well in it.
【解析】
【名师点评】
1.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
2.高分亮点：
短语：a lot，in the future，what's more，set up，such as，look forward to，do well in。
句型：I am looking forward to taking the course in the new term. 我期待着在新学期上这门课。look forward to doing sth期待做某事，固定搭配。
I believe I will do well in it. 我相信我会做得很好。I believe后接宾语从句；do well in在……方面做得好。
